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for Pretty Girl

by StarKneazle

person october
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol to the whole thanksgiving thing, so true. And im loving this story so far, its really well written
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another Fabulous chapter. I am entranced as to see what will happen next. I hope your Thanksgiving Holiday went well, I suspect you may be a Southern Girl at heart with all your talk of mashed potatoes. Please continue writing. I hope to see the next chapter soon.
-Kefi
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is good
I like how they haven't strayed far from the original characters yet.
Looking forward to the next chapter,

xxo
person kazfeist
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved chapters two and three...though I was unable to log on to read the second one, as I was out of town. I am glad you've got their emotions on the same train, speedwise. But it's clear this is a story that will come to a head fairly soon. And, since it's in Sixth Year, we've got Death Eaters to worry about, right? Anyway, have a good holiday. Update when you can. :D
person brayzen
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
while i really liked your story-- I take offence in your interpretation of what Thanksgiving is about in actuality the first thanksgiving was a celebration for a successful harvest that the pilgrims shared with the native americans. Both sides provided food and feasted for several days. Thanksgiving is not an american celebration of killing native americans. So im correcting your statement of "Fun Facts" cause quite frankly i am appalled that you would even consider that killing anyone would be a celebration at all. and if this is what you have learned about history then you have clearly been mislead.
person Morgan80
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another great chapter. Will be waiting for the next one and happy thanksgiving!
person jd
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yummy read. wow. please update soon.
person Fallen Star
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.... It has so much more than others!!!!! I just love it!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! Happy Turkey Day!!!
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a slap! Ooh, all that sexual tension just makes this story sizzle. It's also funny which just makes it such a good read. I am loving this and I have listened to the Ani DiFranco song and I love it, so thanks for that as well. I can't wait to see what happens next. Don't agree with Hermione on one point - Draco should always be naked, no clothes necessary!

Happy Turkey Day to you! I'm in Scotland and a veggie so I'm totally excluded from the whole turkey thing but enjoy!
person Kasri
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My god,can you ever not be a brilliant and creative and really, really just too good altogether writer?! You are a /master/, really. The way you can write all the confusing emotions and bring so mny new dimensions to the chracters... It floors me, it really does. Also,Dramione = AWESOME.

Your loving fangirl, Kasri.