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Loved this!!!! There are not enough Hermione/Alastor stories. 

Delightful story. Quite the unique coupling; I love how you managed it without making it weird. Of course I'm a sucker for time travel...

A lot is left unexplained when it comes to the alterations of the time stream though: how is Dumbledore alive, how did Moody survive the fight to get Harry to school, what other things were changed because of his foreknowledge (like was he still tricked by Barty Crouch Jr in book 4), how has he dealt with Hermione in any meetings they would have had before her return, would it change her memories of him (no longer looking like an old man)?
I know... I think too much into fanfiction.

Thanks for writing.

Loved it.

I am so glad that I stuck with this story. When I saw that it was Moody, I could not fathom such a pairing (ick), but it is sweet in a gruff, huffy way. Hermione is always my favorite. really good so far. p

I was expecting abraxas not alastor but i enjoyed this very much it made me smile well done

No man who calls me 'Missy' would be able to win my heart. Never seen a Moody/Mione pairing before---kudos for creativity. I am creep'd out by the fact that Hermione and Moody picked right up in the future. He'd be in his 80s(physically halting his aging doesn't stop him from maturing emotionally, spiritually, and intellectually)! Don't you think he may have outgrown her?

When I sae the time turner fic and the AM/HG, I was positive that it meant Abraxas Malfoy. I don't think I have ever seen a story with Hermione paired with either of them. I am quite looking forward to more of this. I only just started in on it now.

~Mia

I've re-read this story maybe 6 times already. I'm so in love with it. I think there's technically a time paradox--all the events that she relates to Moody no longer happened, and I think society still had the "little woman" point of view where a lot of women didn't have jobs etc., so Hermione would be considered rather unique at that time for being a solicitor and knowing auror-type things etc. I would also expect Hermione to show up in the present a a week or two or earlier than when she got sent to the past.

It's nice to see Dumbledore's actual love life represented here. I love all the Missys and Womans etc. Alastor is surprisingly appealing. I especially love the bit where she's appreciating the beauty of his eyes while talking about all he's lost.

Have I mentioned I really love this story? Ron squawking about not having him and Harry be fired from Auror-training was a great little detail.

I read this and I liked it. Only, it was moving a little fast at times, as when they first started their sexual relationship. Not much was said about that and I kinda missed that...

this was a very nice lil story that im sorry to see end so quickly, i LOVE the unusal pairing and the way it worked great job!