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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! cute veela fic!!!
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really really really enjoyed this!! I liked how intense it was, with Hermione remembering random 'factoids' to keep her calm whilst dealing with a fully functional male veela. Excellent oneshot!!
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a great story!
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As an asiraing fanfiction writer. I have been researching how to write a romance novel and how to write emotions in the stories. So far my stuff has been to sterial. After reading that you should 'show' not 'tell' what your character is writing. After reading your one-shot, I can see what they where doing not being told. I exspecually loved how you espressed their fellings and their reactions to each other. I love the thought of the 'watched' marking was not watched. THis is a wonderful story
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's an interesting view of a veela mating-- I like it!
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was intense. I thought it was great, and I could stand to see a little more of those 48 hrs.
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
grins....an leaves a do-not-disturb ( this mean YOU Harry and Ron!) on the door.....
and leaves the happy couple for the weekend
and leaves the happy couple for the weekend
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved this! I was having a bad day but this definitely has it looking up! Thanks for sharing!
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is abouttime... i LOVE veela/draco mate/hermione fics and it has been a long time sincce i have found one... great job... i love it.... i hope that you decide to write a full story based on draco and hermione with the veela thing... you did a great job at writing the bonding scene i think that is exactly how it would happen!!!! so seriously i am not above begging!!!!
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I loved it. Cute and rough and sweet and sexy. Perfect. :D