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for All Wounds Heal In Time

by MissLibrarian

person mageemi
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! He's getting his memory back, and Hermione's name was the trigger! Hope he gets out of there soon.
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again, I can't tell you how much I loved this chapter. I like Hermione's despair, Severus' hopefulness and then the end was just great. So, Severus remembers. Will he be able to communicate that to Hermione on her next visit? Does he really want to remember? Those are the questions I want answered. Lovely bit of writing.
person nmos
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great update!
person sevsgirl
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is BRILLIANT!!!

Write more as soon as you can. Now's a good time. lol.


person Carine
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi Marie,
I really enjoy this story soooooo much.I can really sense Snapes boring life,being held prisoner in his own body.When I read these chapters I can clearly imagine the tiles he's counting and recounting, again and again.Your style is just perfect for this kind of story.
person mageemi
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Great story so far. Poor Severus, for years, just trapped within his own mind, lost to all left behind in the wizarding world. I wonder how he ended up there in a muggle hospital in the first place. Looking forward to more chapters soon.
person neelix
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is really well contructed and very interesting.

Now let the poor Professor wake up!
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how you set things up in the story. So many authors just tell the facts. I like that you weave some mystery into it.

George is a wreck still. It's not surprising but so sad.

I can't think right now, headache, but I just want to tell you how much I enjoy this story.
person CB13
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So mysterious! You're giving us lots to ponder - an excellent start.

And I wanted to thank you for your "personal statements" - they made this Yankee smile. It's good to have the beginnings of respect again from other citizens of the world.

Cheers

CB
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so intrigued by the way you portray his recovery. It seems that Hermione is the catalyst, but how? I love this story so much. I can't wait for more, but I guess I'll have to. :(

Thanks for the congrats on our new president. Those of us that voted for him have high hopes.