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holding hands! hooray!

Great chapter. Hope the next one will be up soon.

Hi Marie,this chapter was simply amazing.All her hesitation for not touching him could only lead to his waking up by her touch.So no more counting tiles and tiles and tiles I hope...

That was BRILLIANT!!!

A bezoar - a stroke of genius.

GAH! I can't wait for the next chapter - I hope you're posting it now.

:::runs off to check:::

Hello, I'm enjoying the story thus far, though I do find Hermione a bit too careful and timid in certain situations, for example not wanting to touch Snape as she washes him, especially since Dumbledore has specifically told her to care for Snape. Surely she is better at reading the message behind the words. Also George and Minerva's laughter and hilarity seem a bit too much. Yes they are over the war, but Hermione has just explained about Snape's condition. Shouldn't there be a bit more concern, a bit more of wanting to go see Snape or if not that, even a bit more understanding. However, people are callous everyday, and you are completely free and I suppose justified to bring this out in your narrative. Hope you don't mind the criticism, but it is because I am enjoying your story that I felt I should mention it. Thank you for sharing.

Great chapter!

Yay! Thank you for the chapter!

greaatttt update.
but such a terrible place to end!
please update soon!

Excellent chapter! I love the way you're delineating her inner conflict and his. That image of him swatting her with a bedpan had me laughing out loud, not for the first time, and then the switch of emotions was breathtaking. More, please.

*Mrs* McGonagall?!