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Great, great start. I can't wait to see where this goes. I am absolutely looking forward to you continuing this story. I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Thanks!

Interesting!

I'd have to say this is an interesting beginning, I am curious to know where it might lead! I hope you post more!

Lady B*

I think you have something here with a lot of potential to both be very erotic and to explore the ways the characters might change after the war and Hogwarts ended. I can completely see Ron being so selfish as to betray her in that way, almost a near-peadophiliac obsession. I can also see Hermione needing to reassure herself of her own sexuality and femininity. Your style is simple and straightforward, which in many ways adds to the attraction of the story. I hope you continue to develope this further.

I have written several fanfictions (I usually post elsewhere as I'm not good in smut)and I find the premise of your story quite interesting. I would love to see this story continued.

ooo very good begining. Love how you wrote hermione and luna. very good story idea too. I cannot wait for you to continue this.