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for All that glisters is not gold

by LadyDisdain

schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When I start giggling as soon as I see a story's been updated, I think that's a good sign. Looking forward to a lot more!
person kazfeist
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start! I didn't know you'd started a new story! Archived over at Ink, as well? :D
person maddie50
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The Ministry left him there with no instructions about the items in the apartment operated?
person Shiv5468
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's an interesting start. Lucius exiled in the muggle world is an interesting idea to explore, and his fascination with the microwave was fun to read.

I hope Hermione turns up soon.
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lucius. At least he is slowly figuring things out. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Lucius has discovered a microwave!! Cannot wait to see how Hermione is introduced to this xxxx
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gods, I hope he never leaves a spoon in the microwave! I did that and the meltdown was awesome! Good chapter!
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I want more! I've just recently fallen in love with Malfoy Sr., and you're right, this is the worst punishment he could ever get!

I like the flow of your writing, keep up the good work!
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great start. I can't wait to read more.
person Ithilwen
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic.. Decided to comment after I read another part besides the 1st. And yes. I think this has good potential..
If you could just maybe make the chapters abit longer? Would be much appreciated.

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