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for On All Hallows Eve......

by soldiersgirl0709

person Anon
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant masterpiece, S_G. :) Cliched stormy weather, something strange on the road causing them to crash but not be hurt. The lightning flash on the sign and the backdrop of a tortured looking building that time has left untouched as if it's doors had been closed only yesterday. Loved it!! Fantastic setting for a delicious H/D romp and declaration of their feelings. Pure bliss to read, as your stories always are. :)
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww. Yay, that was so cute! It made my heart really happy. Great first post! Keep em commin.
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mariteri - what an awesome first fanfic. Well done you. :) Poor Hermione, I'm so glad (and half jealous) that she had Draco to care for her the way he did. And he must care if he was ready to acknowledge Harry for her. I loved Harry sneaking Ginny off to some dark corner too. And the ending - OMG that was funny and scary at the same time. I love Fred, I wish Percy had been the Weasley to die in the offical books, not Fred. But to have Snape play a final trick on them and already be planning next year's little soiree - loved it. :)
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol awww
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mariteri...

That was very good. I enjoy a protective Draco, and this fic showed him in that light. Hermione is a lucky girl!! Keep writing!!! I'd love to see you post another story!!

Lady B*

xoxo
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Great touch at the end with Snape! and I love the idea of Drao strangling Ron for being a git.
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh god, i love severus. wow, ive never said that before. but only because of the laughter. runs and hides**
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't help seeing Brad and Janet at the beginning..."There's a light..." I loved every second of it-great job, sis!
Hugs-
D
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG SG, This actually scared me for a little while!

Seriously good! I can't wait to write my own offering!

Fantastic as always!

Vic x
person Leah
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And what cute little half-blood Malfoy's they would make! Another great story!

I like how loving Hermione made Draco brave when she needed him to be.

Good job!