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Aww great story! I think you did a good job. I love the way you made Draco, he's all sweet and caring *sigh*

Cute, sweet, and super funny! Snape and Fred! LOL! Bravo!

that was cute i really liked the end where fred and albus were congratulating each other and then severus came in and scared them that was good

I just wanted to thank everyone for your positive feed back and to let you know that I started posting a story under my own name. It's called The Return it is under the Sirius/Hermione sub-area. If you could read and review I'd be grateful. Thanks again. mariteri

oh that was great... i loed it....

You got me good there..

I was scared tooo....lol.

Thanks for the story; I love it.

Baybeetricia

great and spooky

I loved it! So, uh, I decided to try my hand at fanfiction. With any luck it doesn't stink and I download it correctly. I may love technology, but by no way does that mean I know how to operate it. Excellent work and wish me luck!

Oh S_G, you had me all creeped out the entire time I was reading it. The setting reminded me of Waverly Hills Sanatorium...the pregnant nurse who killed herself, big rusted-out abandoned (haunted) building. You had me on the edge of my chair. At first, I didn't know what scary way you were going to take this...hit and run of a homeless guy who turns out to stalk who hit him (even though he's dead)...Hermione and Draco alone in their disabled car on a back road...there were so many ways you could have went with this.

I thoroughly enjoyed the fact that it started out as Hermione being the scaredy-cat then Draco ended up losing sleep because of the shadows and noises. It was scary and hot all at the same time.

Excellent start to a great challenge (as always)! I'm looking forward to seeing what people will come up with.
MHS

Mariteri - I think you did great for a first timer!! Funny the haunted house theme....Im going to some tomorrow night!!!!!!!!!