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for On All Hallows Eve......

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well my bravo's are to chap 3 and chap 5, although I did love all of them but chap 3 was not at all creepy but it broke my heart though, i cried soooo much, it was still halloween and romantic and reminded me of the movie "Ghost". And chap 5 Ms. BGD u at it again, sigh, its your MUSE here, that one was hot, and one of my own fantasies...lol, LOVED IT, and dont worry a VERY VERY LONG review is coming your way for your fic soon.
person shelagh
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow thanks for all the kind owrds!!! They really make an old lady feel great. Each and every story posted here has been wonderful. I can't wait to see what's next. Thanks for the challenge and the inspiration.
person Anon
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AnyaG- that was wonderful. What a wonderful read (not to mention a great inspiration for your fic). :) "The soft blade of his lip drew across the column of her neck" was my favourite line, I loved the picture that flashed before my eyes as I read that. Picturing the 'slide of his penis' wasn't too bad either. ;) LMAO.
person KraeHi
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow TYVM dream! I had a lot of fun writing it. LMAO yeah I roared w/ laughter when i read your comment. That really bolstered my confidence as a writer too. Thanks again!

~anya
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I haven't been able to read them until now but I must say that I really love everybody's challenges. Everyone did such a great job and I'm very looking forward to the ones that are to come.

With that said I have a small question for Snape's Goddess...are we only allowed to write one for the challenge or can we write more than one for it? Because I've had a sudden break of inspiration and I really wanted to submit it to the challenge.
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Anya Greyback- It was awesome! I loved it! And never let it be said that you were just an okay writer. You have a gift. Keep working it and I hope to read more of your writing soon.
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
~AnyaGreyback~

an interesting twist there at the end...they are married! =) Very well written...and very hot indeed!!


Lady B*
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn you, i teared up
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
~bubblegumdego~

Wonderfully smutty little one-shot.....a bit terrifying for poor hermione but none the less a hot experience =)

Well done!

Lady B*
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
bubblegumdego- I loved it. Though I have to say if I had something like this happen to me, the man in question would have ended up injured. What can I say? I don't startle well. Great work and I hope to read more of your writing in the future.

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