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for On All Hallows Eve......

by soldiersgirl0709

person Anon
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sapphic Jade - that was so bloody hilarious. I could easily picture Draco hanging up in the tree and carrying on like that and scarying the shite out of the smart arse ones but bringing a delightedly frightening 'scream' from the little ones. And OMG, that would have been a scream to see your brother and his mate hanging from the tree like that on Halloween. I tell you what, I am getting so jealous, I sure wish Halloween was celebrated over here. It's so not fair!! Great story. :)
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lola- I truly enjoyed your story. It was a gem!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
~LolaDiBlack~

A sad tale to be sure, I wasn't sure which set of people were dead at first, Draco amd Hermione or Lucius, Narcissa and the children. Good Job!!!

Lady B*
person Anon
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Lola, now that's what I call a twist - and darn it, where was the warning that tissues were required???? Nicely done! :)
person ASwanson
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As always I love your stories!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sarah- I loved the set up in this story. More than likely because you weren't trying to scare or freak us out. Good story!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha i loved it!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved it!
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet jesus, that had my heart pounding on several diffrent levels. *LOL* GREAT one shot.
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You guys are awesome!!! Ive loved everything submitted so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Happy Writing!
S_G