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for On All Hallows Eve......

by soldiersgirl0709

person Anon
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HMF - that was so.....beautiful, so bittersweet and amazing and brought tears to my eyes - gosh darn it!! I was truly moved!! Well done! Now what was gran's story? - I'm a bit slow with theses things. :)
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it!!! A bit of tradition and history as well as Draco and Hermione!! =)

And who cares if its late! A good stpry can be told at anytime!!!

Well Done!!!


Lady b*
person smmz79
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chap... loved it and loved the sex scene
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eww I've been on one of those prison tours and they are very, very creepy. You can feel 'eyes' upon you, 'hear' screams, moans and goodness knows what else and when they take you to the gallows or 'old sparky' - well I was bloody glad to get out of there so, I'm with Draco on this one, Helene - mucho creepy - :)
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mrs_Helen_Snape- That story was great. I loved the back story that had Draco so freaked out. Good going and I hope to read more of your writing soon.
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
shit i was even scared a bit
person Zabath
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAARRRGH!!! Awesome!!! Lol, Had lots of fun...too bad my first review is on a one shot, cause I'm intrigued by who this Manic Dark Wizard is..XD. However, great job :P!
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sapphic Jade- That was great. I loved the way he found joy out of scaring the kids. But one thing, and this is all me, I would have loved it if Hermione had a stronger presence in the story. It was a strong story even without her there, but it would have been nice to have her show up at the end asking him if he had fun. Good going and I hope to read more of your writing soon!
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just had to chime in to say these have been great! I have enjoyed each and every one. I wish I could write one shots...Sigh. Oh well, I guess I just get to live vicariously through all of you. So, thanks! HG4eva
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very cute story, Sarah. I'd love to know how their private costume party went on. ;) LOL