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for Only through the pain

by THEleprechaun

schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Lord! Thank you for this chapter. I was salivating the entire time Draco was dancing. Need I say how extremely hot that was? I cannot tell you just how much I needed that. Bless you for taking me out of my head and bringing me to my happy place.
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 35!!! Holy moly!!! Must have more!
person Emo.Jesus
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
my psp was acting up so i couldnt read anything fur a while...but i like your writing style! cant wait fur the next update!!!
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao. well thats a new one.
person kim6ba
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Hope your feeling better soon, and keep your creative juices flowing. One really small nitpick Ginny Weasley's name is Ginevra not Virginia. I'm guessing your American, because a lot of your slang has an American feel to it. I really am enjoying your story.
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lovely cant wait to read more and feel better *virtual hugs*
person Christi
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my, that was just too spectacular...I laughed so hard it caused a coughing fit-stupid cold thingamajig...anyway, that was great, loved it... hope you're feeling better dahling...which chat did you sign up for? I'd love to chat with ya :-)...can't wait for the next chapter...'til then, snuggles to you, Blondie and darling babies...take care
person knj4k4
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i dont think its short and stupid...well...not stupid anyway. i think it was a perfect way to write the walk out. otherwise you'd have to write so much more..all their feelings, the angst, and how she helped him keep talking, this was way better in my opinion and way funnier.
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha... you named the chapter after To Wong Foo? ^^ Hilarious movie... although I highly recommend Prisilla, Queen of the Desert. Phenominal drag queen movie. You'll love it. I swear.


Speaking of swearing.. I swear this is a hell of a kick ass story. I always get a kick out of the bizarre silly little tangents you add to the story here and there. I've read this whole thing throughout the course of one day.
Keep up the great work!!
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe ^^ I just finished reading up through chapter 21 and I must say I'm soooo thrilled that you switched them up and let Harry top. I always find it hard to believe it when most of these couplings in fanfiction seem to insist on the characters only playing submissive or dominate rolls exclusively. So silly.


Anyway, I'm going to have to finish the rest of these chapters later, so expect another review, but I just wanted to comment on how awesome this story is and I look forward to what ever else it to come in the awaiting chapters. The characters are really nicely fleshed out and the story is enjoyable as hell. Actually I simply love the idea of the Griffindors turning Slythern's layer into a smoking den. Hilarious.

Keep up the great work! ^^