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for Dark Desires v2

by home100

schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's different...I like it...Just the format is a little confusing
person Codyesh2
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good work. I stress the use of quotes for dialogue.Harry and Petunia sex scene would be nice(Other than oral)also some other female characters like Tonks/Molly and Ginny...
person Hermyone
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good, hope there is more to come :)