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October 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM
pretty interesting so far!
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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*evil grin*
Is Harry absorbing the part of voldemort within him?
If yes... both Dumbledore and Voldy are done for.
Not a chance against dark Harry, if you ask me.
The question is, is Ron and his family on his side or dumbledores?
The Headmaster would be easily able to perform a little mind magic to have them do what he wants...
(forget things, say others... easy, really... obliviate is all he needs, but there are even better spells...)
... I really hope you continue your story^^
Is Harry absorbing the part of voldemort within him?
If yes... both Dumbledore and Voldy are done for.
Not a chance against dark Harry, if you ask me.
The question is, is Ron and his family on his side or dumbledores?
The Headmaster would be easily able to perform a little mind magic to have them do what he wants...
(forget things, say others... easy, really... obliviate is all he needs, but there are even better spells...)
... I really hope you continue your story^^
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its cloak, not clock ;)
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like the story cant wait for more.
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great start to the story, but could have more spaces in the story, I like the
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome more chapters please this is great add more sex and loads more girls for harry to dominate .
Let him get his revenge against them all hahaha
Petunia should be one of his main sluts
Let him get his revenge against them all hahaha
Petunia should be one of his main sluts
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. As well as other girls I hope he keeps Petunia.
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start. I like a powerful Harry. I hope he moves on from Petunia, a powerful Harry can have whomever he wants. Also, can you please use quotation marks, it's difficult to follow.
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I have to wait and see where you are going to go with the story before I can give you a more detailed review. But as long as you have Harry with Hermione in some way that doesn't involve her betraying him I will be a loyal reader. And lots of weasley bashing will be appreceiated, And pleas PLEASE No Harry/Ginny and no Hermione/Ron that's just gross. And just a reminder Hermiones loyalty has always been towards Harry and when she finds out about the betrayal she will make people pay for hurting her Harry.
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice