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for Devil's Poison/Vampire's Kiss

by LadyBlueEyes

person kazfeist
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hah! That was neat! Never read that particular location for a tryst, but it was well-executed, and I always love a happy ending. :D
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That shit was fucking hotttt, a shower could have never solved my problem, geez, that has to rank up there has some of the hottest smut ever. Brilliant writing, wish it was longer story...lol.
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved it so much. bloody fantastic!
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you emailed me and warned me of the hotness this story would entail. As you know I have visitors at the moment so I had to sneak on to read and try to keep quiet at the same time. LMAO Almost found it as difficult as Hermione and Draco did. That was just so delish. I'm also glad I didn't have to wait for part two - that would have been agony. And I must admit, I do love those little voyeuristic peeks which is how I feel whenever I read a good story like this. Thank you so much for sharing. :)

Oh I must add, George was an absolute scream, I love your charicature of a pompous English noblewizard. Hermione bug!! Oh chap and all that. If I wasn't fanning my face in sheer delight, it was trying to fan away the tears from laughing so much. So thanks for that too. :)
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was BRILLIANT!! I absolutly loved it! I? In the closet...watching...gracious. The heat radiating off from this story could melt snow. *HUGS*
person Lexy Malfoy
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God that George was annoying as hell. And Hermione Bug? *gags*

Great fic hun. I really liked it. And the closest voyeuristic sex was very hot indeed. =D
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! Another Snapes_Goddess challenge. Those always have such interesting submissions. I can hardly wait until it's officially posted.

DP/VK has a very intriguing start. I have a thing about Dramiones that start off as hate and turn into something hot and lust filled. Gives you something realistic to build the story on (I mean the existing hate between those two is blatantly obvious!)

Looking forward to chapter 2!
MHS
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It definitely did live up to the lust filled part of the Dramione relationship. There's something undeniably HOT about watching another couple shag themselves senseless while you're practically in the same room doing the exact same thing (not that I would personally know anything about that *SNERK*)

I enjoyed this quick interlude very much! Looking forward to seeing how the new S_G challenge will play itself out.
MHS
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sexy and cute. I like it!!!!
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHHH SNAP! This is gonna be good, I can FEEL it. Never patiently, but waiting none the less. *HUGS*