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i like this story, it is awesome, so is this chapter, lol

good chapter

good chapter

cute

Having not read the original, I have no idea how your translation flows in comparison, however, as posted, it flows better, and has fewer grammatical errors than many written by those who claim English to be their primary language. Bravo to you for undertaking such a challenge so that others many enjoy this story. Please continue as you have thus far as I would like to continue reading this story.

Since i can't read spanish, I don't know if your translation matches with the original or not. But from what i've read so far it's pretty good, the plot flows quite nicely, and not many grammar/spelling errors.

Keep up the good work!

i like this story, i am looking forward for more