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very very very good chapter
keep up the graet work and post bye bye

Damn, the translation is very smooth. And you said the original is in spanish?

(O_O)

Too bad I can't read spanish...

Thank you for translating it!!!!

i love it

Good chapter.

OMG! Brilliant!!! Are you truly going to make Elboron, Ezellahen, and the future Eldarion as the Golden Trio of The Middle Earth? I can't wait! ^_^

Please update chapter 6 soon !_!

Jan

Another great chapter!

good chapter.

I like it! and you are doing great with the translation.

this looks really interesting and good. i would love to read the original, but i'm not that fluent yet. hopefully i will be, someday. i'm tempted to find it, just to see if i can understand. you said the fic is finished in spanish, but are you still in the process of translating? it looks like it, since this is only four chapters, and i'd like to think that the original version is longer than that. anyway, this looks good, as far as translating goes. i only noticed one spot that was missing a word. also, if you could pass along the message to the original writer, this fic is amazingly written and it looks like the plot will be great!~

okay. i really like this fic and hope to see more of the translation soon! i'm not nearly good enough yet to make many suggestions on the translations, but i don't think it's taking away from the story, so keep going with what you've found works. as far as the inconsistent language...that would bother me too, but since i'm not a die-hard lotr-nerd, i don't recognize the dialect differences. y'know, til you told me. anyway, this is amazing. keep translating, because i really want to know what happens, but i'm just not that good at spanish yet. maybe some day, five or six years from now, i can go back and reread it in the native language.~