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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would love to beta for you if you still need one. Also the chapter was great. I wish I could have seen Ron's face when Draco informed him that Hermione was his girlfriend. Keep up the good work. Oh, my email is WinterhartZC@comcast.net
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chapter. Haven't noticed any glaring errors or glitches. And, now I'm worried about Ron's next actions. Can't wait for the rest of the story. :D
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have read the whole thing in one shot.... Love what you did for Lucius and Hermione on father/daughter feelings and of course my favorite.. Draco/Hermione.... I know that Ron is trouble but could you remove it from the picture quickly I do not even like him on the original books and of course I have fun with the fan fiction just kicking is ass.. LOL... Keep them coming.. Lourdes
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow the first date it was perfect great job i am looking forward to the next chap....
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for updating....I remember reading this earlier. Have you gotten further along in another forum? The kiss near the Shrieking Shack was just lovely. I love the tone you've set for this story. There's enough postwar trauma, but the sense of hope for the future is really refreshing. Couple typos distract, on occasion, but the characterizations and the plot complexity are very much appreciated. Keep up the good work, and can't wait for more.
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that I saw this story today! It's beautifully written and I cannot wait to see what you do with the characters! Thank you for this wonderful story!
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November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome .. please please update soon ... later for now
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very hot kiss...surprised ron didn't react more to it. Guess quidditch overtook jealousy. ;)