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November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am sooooo gonna miss this story!!!!
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had meant to read this before Halloween, but then I went on vacation and that
plan was blown out the water...
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about the story...
Of all the pranks, Day 5, 6 were the best ones, especially the one where everytime a teacher spoke, music would start.
...and then came Day 7, Oh...My...God!!! That was funny!!! The last time
someone attempted in a story where a main character broke into song, it didn't
come across as funny, it was just so-so. You pulled it off beautifully. :-)
Though, I think a few of the lyrics to ''Thriller'' were wrong, but it's still all good.
All in all, this was fun! You don't see a lot of humorous stories, so it's refreshing
when someone takes the time to write one.
plan was blown out the water...
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about the story...
Of all the pranks, Day 5, 6 were the best ones, especially the one where everytime a teacher spoke, music would start.
...and then came Day 7, Oh...My...God!!! That was funny!!! The last time
someone attempted in a story where a main character broke into song, it didn't
come across as funny, it was just so-so. You pulled it off beautifully. :-)
Though, I think a few of the lyrics to ''Thriller'' were wrong, but it's still all good.
All in all, this was fun! You don't see a lot of humorous stories, so it's refreshing
when someone takes the time to write one.
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've just read the first 3 chapters of your story, and i quite like it. I just wanted to mention to you, as french is my first language, that "l'amour" is actually french. I'm not sure what the italian translation is, maybe amor or amore. Thought you ought to know. Apart from that, i like the concept.
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seven and a half inches long and a good three-quarters of an inch around -- chapter 8
you may want to get a ruler so you know what 3/4 of an inch looks like. (hint: it's about as wide as the mouth on a 2 liter bottle of pepsi) a normal guy is between 1&1/2 -- 2 inches wide; 4 -- 6&1/2 inches long. big would be 2&1/2 inches wide
you may want to get a ruler so you know what 3/4 of an inch looks like. (hint: it's about as wide as the mouth on a 2 liter bottle of pepsi) a normal guy is between 1&1/2 -- 2 inches wide; 4 -- 6&1/2 inches long. big would be 2&1/2 inches wide
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How do you want me to send you the finished stories?
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, this entire story was an elaborate Ric Roll?!
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow!! finally finished!!!!
LOVE the smut!! lol!
and what's the title of the song ?? i wanna listen....
oh.. and im reading here instead of in ff.net cause of the smutness!!
HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!!!
LOVE the smut!! lol!
and what's the title of the song ?? i wanna listen....
oh.. and im reading here instead of in ff.net cause of the smutness!!
HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!!!
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Er.... I didn't mean anything by my review, I thought if it was a Rick Roll, the end would have been infinitely funnier and I would have remembered this story for a long time with a fond smile. The entire story gave me a big laugh and I enjoyed it, sorry if I somehow offended you.
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy moly!!! I sooo need chapter 13!!!
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*claps* bravo darling