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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was reading this on fanfiction when it disappeared.
I am positively thrilled to see it here.
Asher is one of my favourite characters.
I always think that he doesn't get enough attention in the books.
Please Update Again Soon!
I am positively thrilled to see it here.
Asher is one of my favourite characters.
I always think that he doesn't get enough attention in the books.
Please Update Again Soon!
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you put two chapters in here instead of just one because I wasn;'t sure if I would have just reviewed after one chapter... Very glas. Interesting topic, not many people choose to do a crossover with Anita Blake, which is okay, because most of them turn out to be unique (although this one has ripples from that other AB/HP crossover where Asher and Harry are also together- though to your credit, they weren't pomme de sang and master-?- first). I'd like to see where you're going with this and if it will be a PWP or something more. Thanks!
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome, please please update soon . later for now
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im interested...and like to read more.
I always was intrigued to read Asher/Harry fics... they are so alike and are meant for each other.
I always was intrigued to read Asher/Harry fics... they are so alike and are meant for each other.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There is never enough of AB/HP crossovers, so I just wanted to thank you for writing this fic.
To tell you the truth, there is not much to review. At least not yet. Good idea, good style, fun to read but at this point, nothing that would make a lasting impression. But I will certainly be waiting for more.
There is just one problem. In your story Harry is 15, but in Anita Blake universe feeding from minors (even consensual) is a crime and all the main characters in that universe feel very strongly about this. Not to mention that if I remember correctly, it is punishable by death. I'm all for Harry/Asher pairing, I can understand why Harry would consent to a relationship and everything that it entails, but Asher feeding from a minor, not to mention having a sexual relationship with one .. it simple does not compute, not without a good explanation.
To tell you the truth, there is not much to review. At least not yet. Good idea, good style, fun to read but at this point, nothing that would make a lasting impression. But I will certainly be waiting for more.
There is just one problem. In your story Harry is 15, but in Anita Blake universe feeding from minors (even consensual) is a crime and all the main characters in that universe feel very strongly about this. Not to mention that if I remember correctly, it is punishable by death. I'm all for Harry/Asher pairing, I can understand why Harry would consent to a relationship and everything that it entails, but Asher feeding from a minor, not to mention having a sexual relationship with one .. it simple does not compute, not without a good explanation.