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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please!!! I love it!!
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let me start by saying that there are not enough AB/HP Xovers... hey, you could post this at Pomme de Sang, maybe it would encourage some of their authors to pick up their fics.
Oh, yes, the review.
I love it. I love it. I love it. I can
Oh, yes, the review.
I love it. I love it. I love it. I can
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off I find your story a breath of fresh air, truely I do. And the way you portray Harry is just adorable. I hope that you continue to update this story, for I've never read a crossover like this one. Anyway keep up the good work. KaiDragon
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOH i like this story you reminded me that i really have to update mine
hope to see more soon
hope to see more soon
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter like the slashy parts.... I'M A SLASH WHORE update soon
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay lovly chapter i personally would like to wake up like that!!
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You need to explain better how Harry healed so quickly. You didn't even have Asher splint the breaks in his arm & leg. Broken bones don't heal that fast without help. Either Harry's magic was helping him heal (which would've surprised Asher) or Asher gave Harry some of his vampire blood which could have speeded healing. You should specify.
You also might have Asher go to the Dursley's to collect Harry's belongings. It might be fun to see Asher confront Vernon. ;-)
I like the story so far. You just need a few more details.
You also might have Asher go to the Dursley's to collect Harry's belongings. It might be fun to see Asher confront Vernon. ;-)
I like the story so far. You just need a few more details.
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's good... I hope that it picks up soon though...
Thanks!
-smelly
Thanks!
-smelly
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME STORY!! I cant wait to read more!!
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really like your story so far. I look forwards to reading more.
Just a note you should change your disclaimer to include that you don't make any money from your stories. If you don't the mods will hide your story until you change it to show a right disclaimer.
A good one would be: I don't own HP, AB or any of the characters and I don't make any money from my stories.
Anyway, again, I really like your story and I'm looking forwards to reading the next chapter.
Just a note you should change your disclaimer to include that you don't make any money from your stories. If you don't the mods will hide your story until you change it to show a right disclaimer.
A good one would be: I don't own HP, AB or any of the characters and I don't make any money from my stories.
Anyway, again, I really like your story and I'm looking forwards to reading the next chapter.