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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice bit of french not a very long chappy but still good up date soon
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story, I can't wait to see what's going to be the reaction over everyone, when they find out that Harry is gone. Will they go looking for him? If so, will they actually find him? If your still taking votes, I say for Ron to be good, and Dumbledore bad.
Love the fact that you translate your French dialoged, I hate it when an author writes something in a different language and then don't even bothers to translate it for their readers! So thank you!!! T_T
Please update chapter 7 soon ^_^
Jan
Love the fact that you translate your French dialoged, I hate it when an author writes something in a different language and then don't even bothers to translate it for their readers! So thank you!!! T_T
Please update chapter 7 soon ^_^
Jan
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it so far also bad ron and bad dumbles
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Terrific chapter, I think that Harry still should be learning magic while they are traveling (possibly get him books) so that when something happens, he will be able to protect himself and others.
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just stumbled across this today and have to say, even though the chapters are short, you are off to a pretty good start! I really like the way you have written to combine the two fandoms. Looking forward to further updates and keep up the good work!
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry's friends are so gullible. You'd think after 4 years they'd know he doesn't have any other friends.
BTW: You know, in the Anita-verse it is illegal (at least in the USA) for a vampire to feed off of a minor. Harry can't officially be Asher's pomme-de-sang until 18 (willing or not). Anita would have grounds for an execution order on Asher. She'd hate it but she WOULD kill him. Not even Jean-Claude would risk losing Asher just so he could have a new Pomme.
BTW: You know, in the Anita-verse it is illegal (at least in the USA) for a vampire to feed off of a minor. Harry can't officially be Asher's pomme-de-sang until 18 (willing or not). Anita would have grounds for an execution order on Asher. She'd hate it but she WOULD kill him. Not even Jean-Claude would risk losing Asher just so he could have a new Pomme.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far. If you're wondering why FF.net deleted your story, if you read the rules of what you can post, Laurell K. Hamilton is one of a short list of authors that asked that stories with her character not be allowed on the site. I am wondering after which anita blake book this is written. Also, you may want to change Harry's age. It would be easy to do at this point. Unless you are going to be extremely AU. Legal age for feeding in LKH world is 18, and anita would kill Asher for feeding on a 15 or 16 year old.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good start, love vampire fics
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! More please!!!