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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5!! Of course she won't think she did wrong!
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like where you're going with this story, interesting so far, but you REALLY need to get a beta reader to fix things up - grammar and spelling are quite noticeable. Don't mean to put down your story, but it would read a lot better with the corrections. I know any kind of feedback and beta's that I've used in the past were quite helpful. I've learned alot over the years from them.
Was that all that was in the letter?
~tas
Was that all that was in the letter?
~tas
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 4!!!
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hilarious!
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please!
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry!!! Sooo need chapter 3!!!
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 2!!! What does the letter say? And where is the time turner hidden? Who hid it?
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You really need to ease up on the exclamation marks, I think I counted 14 of them in that chapter. Other than that, I like it.