rate_review Reviews

Whoa. Seriously. Whoa. That was brilliant and beautiful in a dark and kind of harsh way - like the sleet you were describing. I was hooked right away with "the miserable scene" and I loved the descriptions and desirability of good and evil. And Lucius' voice was so spot on. Fuck woman! I will have to thank Soft for the rec. That was an excellent piece of writing!

Well written with sensual detail and an alluring mystery. It simply drew me in from the very start.

Just wanted to drop some more love here. I love the imagery you create with your stellar use of language, it's poetic but not flowery....intimate but leaves me wanting to know much more about this man. I love that I really didn't know who the hell you were talking about until the end because it could have applied to many people. This is just really powerful and I hope you extend it until a multi chaptered story... Great job : )

I'm so glad to see this! It really is a great story, and it's written so well and with such deep layers of emotion to Lucius. Wonderful!

wow
very well written
classy
well worded
loved it