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Holy cow that was a long chapter with a TON of information! And everything pulls together more now! GREAT GREAT chapter! Excellent job!

Okay, so maybe wizards don't quite get the muggle preoccupation with sustenance and jobs and responsibilities and all that, but my only quibble with the chapter is the Grangers' stress about their practice, etc., was laid on a little thick.

As usual, I particularly like the way you write conversations, interactions.

Am way too impatient for the story/plot to progress, so maybe that's why this reaction to the Grangers' understandable stress.

poor Mione, Please let Bill help her!

Hey! No fair blaming me for late updates! Your fans are going to hunt me down and lynch me. You'd feel pretty guilty if that happened, right? Right?!!!

Since I've read variations of this chapter a number of times, this review probably won't be too long. Well, too long for me anyway.

*I'm not a R/Hr shipper, but I am totally rooting for them in this story. I know it won't happen, but I find it funny that there are so many crazy pairings in this story, and for once I'm hoping for the canon one! Unless Draco comes back, of course. ;)

*Okay, I've enjoyed a lot of stuff in this story. A lot of crazy, out there, but still hot stuff. The scene when Hermione's mind drifts to her father while she's touching herself? Creepy. And very telling with how far gone she is. Thank you for not going into too much detail with that.

*I'm still trying to figure out the whole Hermione/Snape dynamic. She wasn't just afraid of him, but repulsed as well. He doesn't seem to harbor any feelings for her, yet he is oddly protective. Although, I was waiting for him to smack her in the hallway just to calm her down. I will continue to watch as this develops.

*Snape's "Just Fucking Great" diatribe amuses me to no end.

*I adore the Weasleys, so another big hug for the eldest son. Hi Bill!

*I will say I'm still curious as to how much the events that we know in Book 5 have been affected by all of this. I know most of the major stuff happens in June, but I am eager to read how all the big moments will unfold.

*Yay for passing 20,000 hits! Congrats!

Hi, been reading your story on and off for a while, my first review - sorry

firstly you are an amazing author - your writing is well thought out & constructed, dialogue is good and you are very creative. I usually like dark/angsty stories with erotic domination scenes but I must admit I started finding it all too disturbing so in the end stopped reading as I felt it was damaging my inner psyche. I started seeing parallels to the fritzl case and it made me feel sick that I was reading this for entertainment. I only started reading again because I wanted to see the story ended and Hermione rescued. Which I am so thankful has hapened. I want sirius to suffer and suffer again and then Kreacher and all the other elves and then bella and the other DE. Maybe sirius could hunt them down and kill them, before going back to azkhaban. Please dont do anything more bad to hermione - let her heal. And I hope you write another story soon, though perhaps one less dark.

So at some point is the elfin magic that got Remus into this going to wear off? And does Remus back off?
And where are all those Death Eaters who are surely wondering where she's gotten to? Not to mention Bellatrix? And Draco?

I know, this is a useless post, meant merely to bug you into writing faster ... the suspense is killing me.

This is another excellent,lengthy chapter. I'm anxious to read about Hermione's decision on Sirius.
Also, I'd like to express that I'm sorry about the child you lost. I don't know what I would do if I had to go through with that.

*"The part where Hermione is remembering Adara sucking on her fist should be credited to WesleyY7." Oh good God, woman! You're killing me here! Hmmm, Adara's death upset her and she kept flashing back to that sweet little scene. I know! I'll have the grieving mother remember the same moment to dig the nail in a little further!! :P

*I've felt that Sirius has been close to the breaking point, and I do believe he's almost cracked. The back and forth his emotions and thoughts, and his anger at Hermione is frightening. I know he's grieving and in denail, but it's still very scary. I don't want him anywhere near her.

*The poor Weasleys! I'm so glad that Ron and Ginny have been Obliviated. I think that will help them remain sane. Part of me wishes they would do the same with Hermione as well and explain Persimionne to her in some way. (Of course then she would never remember Adara.) And I still feel bad that Molly doesn't remember the birth. Here she is so concerned about Sirius, yet he was the one who took that memory away from her.

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Well. That was unexpected, but now that it's done, I'm very glad that you did it. I remember thinking that the reunion with the parents was just a little too pat, but honestly wasn't so interested in it. Was impatient to get to more of the meat of the story, if you know what I mean.

But now that it's been rewritten, it's absolutely right there in the meat of the story, and it feels true.

Good job.

Hoping the next chapter will be coming soon .....

Okay, you've had enough time. UPDATE ALREADY.

Waiting for the Death Eater response to her liberation.

Please????
Pretty please?
With sugar on top?