rate_review Reviews

Good work! It was fun to read this chapter as it finally gives some explanations. Who would have thought Kreacher developing feelings for Hermione? I'm just wondering what Voldemort would do with all the information, or even, if Bellatrix was telling the truth about Voldemort being involved, since Kreacher never saw or spoke to him directly.
Had to laugh when I read that women are only teachable to a certain age, where men are teachable forever: follows my believes that men never grow up ;-) And I liked that you worked Rowlings revelation about Dumbledore being gay into your story.

Actually, 'sex slaves' do not lead horrible lives or didn't in most times of the past. It's only by illegalization of it that we have forced it into the hands of the 'worse of the worse' in society, and therefore made it MUCH more than it was in the past.

That was an awesome chapter! You (and your betas) did an wonderful job of making the chapter easy to understand and readable!

Another great chapter. I'm pretty sure I check your stories more for updates than I check my email so we'll hold off on that for now.
The potion is great. To think that Kreacher actually felt enough to do that is pretty amazing. Of course, he only did it so HIS mudblood would't go crazy and deprive him of his pleasure.
Your hints have been soooo subtle. That's great. Can't wait to hear whast Sev thinks about his teaching.
Will keep watching for updates.

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE HURRY!
YOU SHOULD UPDATE TO LET US KNOW IF YOUR ALMOST DONE OR WHATS GOING ON

Ooooooooooh RemusRemusRemus. I don't like this. He called Hermione a little slut. Well, he didn't say this out loud, but still... He was oh-so-sweet to her even while Kreacher was still "teaching" him, and now this happens. Is it just me or his mind is really in worse state than it was when Kreacher was still present? It's somewhat strange and intriguing at the same time. What does this "teaching" REALLY do with people? Is it completely irreversible? Or, uh, self-catalyzed? I still don't get the whole idea (or I'm just too dumb ^^) and I'm waiting for new details.

Can I just say that I am completely obsessed with this story. I lost sleep because I literally could not stop reading - I felt compelled to find out what happened next! I cannot wait to read what happens next! Not only are you a genius at writing the smutty sexy time, but you did not flinch from the torture (although I did and skimmed over some of that, I'm glad you were real about it) AND your plot is f'ing genius. Truly original, nefarious, and just plain compelling. Also you write really well, and I had no trouble seeing clearly every single scene (which was a problem for me for some of them, as I mentioned above). Also, I find all of your characterizations extremely accurate and believable, even given the extraordinary circumstances you have put them all in. The best scene that demonstrated this was Snape polyjuiced as Lupin. Spot-on perfection.

Thanks for the response!

I'm definetely going to finish the story, its just sooo long. haha.
I really hope Sirius doesn't get away with all this. Dumbledore would never let that happen. But i'm guessing Sirius is going to die at the end like the book. I hope Kreacher gets it too.
Still waiting for Harry and everyone to come into the story. Hurry!

Just to let you know I'm still reading the story and still love it. Very curious as to how evrything will work out. As long as she won't get back into Death Eater's hands, I'm happy ;) Keep up the good work!

After forcing myself not to check twice daily for an update I managed to miss the new chapter by two days! How pathetic am I? The suspense is getting to me though.
Your writing continues to be remarkable as is your research. I agree with the other reviewer that you need to quit working and just write!
Albus is pathetic in his thinking, How will it affect me, syndrome. He should have someone else looking into her best interests. Hope he wakes up and does more to protect her. Also hope he has now realized he needs to get more info out of Kreacher, in whatever way, asap.
Is poor Bill addicted now?
Is Remus beyond control? Kind of sounds like it. He's getting more and more like Sirius.
Do we hear about poor Bella soon, missing her pet? I know, poor Bella, that's hysterical! I can picture her sitting around crying over the loss!
I'll try to control my impulse to check twice daily for updates but I think anxious is the word.
Please continue soon!