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Well it's been a good long while since your last update. i hope things are good with you. My question is will there be any more updates? you have put one of the most gut renching topics there is, into the most intellegent pieces of writing I have ever seen. Full marks!!! This story made me hate most of the people in it. i had to step back from this story several times just to get a breath it moved me so much, and not in a good way, but always well thought out and presented in a way for maximum affect. please keep going if for only to make them all die in a very painful and extended death. all of then. even lupin. And please make kreacher ordered to sit in a lit fireplace.

The reivewers above took the works right out of my mouth. I find this story fascinating and emotional. I to check here weekly for updagtes. Hope you haven't abandened it. Your very talented.

Oh wow this was very well written. I liked your interpretation of Hermione following the ordeal and your domHarry was hot! Hope you write more!

I can honestly say I love this story. I find myself checking randomly for updates and new chapters every week. The depth in which you have described and personified the characters provides a rich basis on which the actions and motivations for said actions, are either completely understood or totally reprehensible but in a way that helps to futher fill out the story. I'm sure it seems like I'm blowing smoke up or ass or sucking up, but I can say that there is honestly no reason in which I would do that, I just find your story to be great. When I first came upon AFF around this time last year yours is one of the first I started reading and it has kept me hooked. At some point my roomie was giving me grief about reading "smut" with no smut and I promptly walked away from him to go back to reading. Please keep up the good work and let all of us who are stuck on this story reach some kind of resolution with the ending even if its not a happy one.

Ack! I can't believe I forgot to review this. You and I have already discussed how emotional this chapter is, but I still hate you for making me cry...again! I love the new additions as well. Very powerful in a completely different way from the power of Adara's funeral. What's interesting is yet again this fic has paralled something in the media. A big news story recently was about a 15 year-old who was gang raped outside a highschool dance for over two hours. What was disturbing was all the reports of how so many teens just stood around and did nothing. Not all joined in, but no one called 911. No one got help. There have been a lot of stories and talking to experts about conformity in that situation. *shiver* You really need to write a totally happy, fluffy story next I think.

Amazing job as always. I am still with you, there is no way I could give up on this story! I confess that you have me seriously worried about Remus...because he is my favorite I like to think he won't do anything horrible or irrational when it comes to Hermione (even in this situation) but I guess you're the only one who knows for sure!

Also, I have to say that I was mightily disturbed by the conversation between Minerva & Albus when they were considering if visiting with Hermione would hurt or help Sirius...WHO GIVES A @#$@, what about what's good for Hermione!?!??!? Sorry for the yelling, but that's what I was thinking during that whole scene. Yes, he is a victim too, but he had some awfully depraved ideas and was totally willing to act on them (watchful Order members being his only deterrent, NOT any kind of morality or sense of what Hermione might want/need/deserve) without any help from Kreacher.

Hooray! A new chapter for me to review on the story's first anniversary. Or should it be first birthday? Can stories have birthdays? :)

There are so many "I wonder if I'm doing the right thing" moments here, that I'm worried that maybe no, they're not doing the right thing and it's all going to blow up in their faces. You know how I feel about Remus's possessive behavior, and now they're keeping Adara's burial a secret from Sirius? Yeah, that's can't backfire on them at all. Plus, does he even know that Remus and Hermione are together-together? Forget Voldie and his Death Eaters. The Order is going to have a problem on their hands with Sirius.

Molly still rocks the house. (Or Sirius's house as the case may be.) And my Weasley loving heart can't help but swell at the mention of Bill, so his return better happen soon. Stop adding stuff! ;)

Interesting chapter, i can't wait to see how and if Sirius tries to get her back

Holy cow, what a huge chapter with a ton of information. I can almost see Remus reasoning for not Letting Sirius by Hermione for the burial, but he does have a right...tough call

As I read this chapter a number of times pre-posting, I only have a few comments.

*Still freaked out over the realization that Kreacher could take Ginny out of Hogwarts without anyone knowing. The possible ramifications of that are horrible. Voldemort having access to the students at Hogwars?! DD needs to put up some Elf!Wards, stat!

*The entire passage about the twns! DD/twins? Ack! Heck, I'm not a big fan of DD/anyone. And I still firmly believe that DD is wrong not Obliviating the twins. 'They aren't harming anyone with their activities. I guess it will be all right to leave things be.' No, they're not adults and could be harming each other. Aaaahh!

*Bella/Regulus? Hmmm...

Okay, I'm ready for the next chapter. And you so know why!! :)