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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful chapter! Nice balance to what had been happening. I so would like Kreacher to get caught being meant though.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh how thoughtful of Sirius to at least attempt to make Hermione's birthday a little bit more memorable for her.
I do have to wonder whether or not she will attempt to escape in the future and if she will be successful.
How many more chapters do you see this story containing?
Please don't rush it, as I am enjoying it tremendously.
Love Sonia :)
I do have to wonder whether or not she will attempt to escape in the future and if she will be successful.
How many more chapters do you see this story containing?
Please don't rush it, as I am enjoying it tremendously.
Love Sonia :)
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. I can see how Sirius might not be such a bad guy in different circumstances. Hermione seems to be getting close to the point where, even if she is rescued, she will never recover psychologically. I still really want her rescued but if you don't plan for this story to end well, please give me a heads up. I hope you have some really good payback planned for Kreacher cause that boy deserves it! Just out of curriosity, why isn't Sirius more squicked out by the stuff Kreacher is doing?
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not a lot of sex in this chapter, but I did have a laugh at your footnotes sending readers back to other chapters to reread the smut there. Good thing you did too because I didn't realize you had added an entire section to the Cherry Bowl scene. Hot, hot, hot! Loved it! Yay for more subliminals, but not so much yay for it being directed at Sirius. Sorry, somnophilia is a kink of mine, but notsomuch with guys. Am beginning to think I'm rather sick for enjoying this, but you're the one writing it, so I don't feel so bad. ;)
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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, but I do understand the above reviewers desire to see Hermione get rescued. It's gotten to the point where it's almost more pain than pleasure. I never thought I would ever type these words, but Kreacher's whispering to a sleeping Hermione is very erotic. I would love to see (and hear) more of his subliminal suggestions to and fondling of an oblivious Hermoine. Okay, now I really feel like a pervert!
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November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please let her be rescued! I get the whole Dom/sub thing but come on. She needs to get out of there. And why can't moody see her in the basement with that magic eye of his?
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, you're doing a really thorough and brilliant job portraying some really heinous and disgustingly depraved acts. I think you could have split up your chapters more so it would be more manageable to read. you pack a whole lot into one chapter, almost too much. anyways, good writing. The last chapter was really really gross, but I understand it is something people engage in and I've accidently come across this on the internet. I feel really bad for Hermione, you portray her feelings really well. Anyway, keep doing what you're doing.
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November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly enjoying this story and I'm not ashamed to say this. Keep up the good work as it looks like you've done your research quite admirably.
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Will there be more?
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
scat please