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Oh no... What is Krecher thinking about at the end of this chapter. Loved it btw. Sirius isn't truly thrilled to become a father. Perhaps he shall change his mind when he sees his son/daughter.

Once again you have done your research and I love all the links you give us at the end of the chapters.

Well done.

Love Sonia :)

Ch 12: Oh my, Sirius is now becoming more daring in his conquest of Hermione. i wonder what shall happen next. Off to the next chapter. Happy holidays. Love Sonia :)

First off, great title for the chapter. Absolutely perfect. Am I to assume the surprise of this chapter is Kreacher servicing his Master? If it wasn't, I was still surprised as Kreacher's attention was focused more on owning Hermione completely. When he was whispering to the sleeping duo in Chapter 11, I knew he was giving Hermione her usual instructions, but assumed he was just trying to sway Sirius towards letting him punish her more. (And Kreacher's nightly teachings are creating some pretty out there fantasy dreams for our poor girl.)

I was so excited to see this update! I check and hope every day even though you seem to be on a bi-weekly schedule, so this update was an absolute wonderful surprise. I really liked the tense discussion between Dumbledore, Sirius, and Snape. I'm glad you mentioned them trying to get into his memories. And I thought you have a good tension between Sirius and Snape. "*I* didn't think you *knew* what a woman smelled like.

Okay, so if they monitor Sirius and Kreacher is the only one who'll be able to take her outside, I'm wondering if that's how we end up with her being paired up with Death Eaters. What kind of crazy-ass things is Kreacher going to do to her outside of the house?

Mental notes on the chapter:
*Breast milk - Interesting that Hermione is beginning to find that thought arousing. I remember back in Chapter 7 how she wondered about it when Ron was sucking on her.
*Thank goodness we see some good in Sirius in this chapter! I'm a bit relieved that if push comes to shove, he'll take her to St. Mungo's. Plus, he took the cuffs off her!
*I love your dirty talk and the frantic (pre-)orgamsic talking. I'm a sucker for the "Oh Gods" and "Pleases".
*My poor Hermione so worried about getting into trouble. And she misses Hogwarts. Fingers crosses she'll eventually make it back.
*Oil. *thud*
*Where's Ginny? I need my mind control/dubious consent femslash, darnit! ;)
*As much as I hate Kreacher, he was able to subliminally teach Hermione how to give a prostate massage *and* the perfect handjob. He should just go around and whisper to everyone in the house, every single night! He'd be exhausted, but the Order would be too busy with each other to worry about a missing Hermione. ;)
*Your research and annotations and links continue to rock. Wasn't brave enough to click on the video, but I continue to fangirl you.
*And I love your long chapters! As evident by my long review!

RE: chapters one through twelve

I noticed that of the ships listed in the following quote, only a few (HG/SB, HG/Kreacher, HG/RW, and SB/RW) have been presented so far.

QUOTE: 'Main Groupings: HG/SB, HG/Kreacher, HG/SS, SB/Kreacher
Other brief encounters (some of these will be HG/threesomes):
SB/RW, HG/BL, HG/RL, HG/DM, HG/GW, HG/LM, HG/RW, HG/V'

Ships listed not yet used: HG/BL (Bellatrix LeStrange?), HG/RL (not sure if this one is Remus Lupin, or one of the LeStrange brothers), HG/DM (Draco Malfoy), HG/GW (not sure if this is George or Ginny Weasley), HG/LM (Lucius Malfoy), HG/V (Voldemort)

*::squirms in delighted anticipation::*
I'm really looking forward to reading the details (which so far have been fantastically presented, and very well written; definite knicker changers--THANK YOU very much!) of Hermione's sexual encounters with the persons listed above that she has yet to experience.
*SMIRK* *WINK-WINK-NUDGE-NUDGE-...* *LEER* *WEG*
;~D

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I hope by all that is holy that Hermione is indeed NOT pregnant, but if she is, that it most definitely is NOT Kreacher's child. I mean, talk about your squick factor, EWW! *::shivers in horrified disgust::*

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I really enjoy all of your informative links and such in the Author Notes at the end of the chapters--thank you!

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VERY well written--keep up the good work!

I love how long each chapter is in this story. It is very refreshing, believe me.
:D

I eagerly await further installments.

Take it easy, and Happy Holidays!

RE: chapters one through three

Riveting, highly erotic, naughty/sinful pleasures, taboo activities all of which are very well written and very exciting to read.

I love your explainations given at the end of the chapters--very informative. Thank you.

Well done--keep up the good work!

RE: chapter five

Ugh! Kreacher is a twisted/sick f@ck that I hope will be put down like the rabid creature that he is, before he harms Hermione anymore.

I hope that Sirius will be able to get his head out of his arse and see that the magazines are nothing but make-believe, BEFORE pushing Hermione into insanity. You know?

Well done--keep up the good work!

So much going on in Chapter 12! It's good that people are beginning to get suspicious, and I was pleased that Sirius felt some remorse for hexing Remus. That being said...Sirius has officially lost it! That paragraph towards the end of the chapter was very telling. Actually believing everyone would forget about her. Worried that he would never "use her again." Eagerly looking forward to having Snape take her, knowing she won't like it. You may be giving her oragasms sir, but I'm not liking you at all.

I'm assuming that Kreacher is still enaged in his nighlty teachings as I'm guessing he gave Hermione the idea for the special massage. He's got her trained well too. I don't think she was even aware she was playing with her breasts while talking to Sirius.

I need to stop looking at your warnings! I am already really concerned about the pregnancy, but was suicide always there? And I'm assuming that HG/V and HG/BL means she'll be taken right into the headquarters of the enemy. You are dark! Although I am cracking up that alongside the warnings of minor, scat, and beast, you also put in a warning for Unresolved Sexual Tension. Way to cover your bases! ;) If I say I fangirl you, would you write quicker? ;)

public sex is just so HOT HOT HOT!!! Loved it!
Ooooohhhhh the noose seems to be getting tighter, can't wait for more. Keep that nasty boy squirming and the heat on, really liked the tension in this chapter. I almost didn't read it out of fear, I am so glad I did.
Keep 'em coming (lol)

Amazing story, never had read a so well developed S&M story that also have plot and quite detail.

Wonder if Hermione is really pregnant? will Krecher now obtain Ginny as a substitute?. That will be nice Hermione need a "companion". maybe a mistress?
Maybe now that Hermione have more training she can go to school? after all will be more interesting if she stay with Sirius willing.
Really hope you write more soon.

JO