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Yeehee, I love Severus and his way of dealing with things. Go Severus!
Secondly, I adore Remus and felt really sorry for him in this chapter, the poor bastard was so conflicted.
I loathe Ron and wouldn't mind if you killed him off. Take him out I say.
Yeah, go the twins. Love the twins.
Hermione is a lost cause really, all I ask of you is when she gets out of there PLEASE don't stick her with Ron I don't think I could cope with that. And besides, Ginny would go into a jealousy rage ;)

Can't wait to see what you have planned for the birth, I hope she has the baby in her rooms and not with Bella, though I don't think you'd do that to us. *Gives hopeful look*

Love Sonia :)

I forced you to add the extra stuff back in? Great, now everyone's going to blame me for having to wait an extra chapter for the birth! That's right, just throw me to the mob! I'm the sacraficial lamb. ;)

*"Remus stood against the far wall, hands in his pockets as he looked at his feet." I love this line because of the visual. Remus, another victim is this zoo, standing by helplessly waiting for things to play out knowing he can't do a thing about it. It was hard enough with Hermione, but now three of his former students are going to be subjected to Merlin knows what, telling them to just go along with whatever Sirius says. Poor Remus. :(

*With all the victims in this chapter, I really, really feel for here is Ron. Being thrust into this situation, having all this information thrown at him, seeing the girl he loves after all these months pregnant...*pets poor Ron*. The image of him sitting on the couch between Hermione and Ginny clutching the girls' hands makes me sad.

*Okay, crazy enraged Sirius scares me even more when he cries. Yeah, unpredictable mood swings and insane.

*"For the first time, she felt a glimmer of hope that if she were to escape this room, that she wouldn't be ostracized and left alone, an outcast with a closet full of shame to keep locked away forever." Poor Hermione. Please don't her fate by dark and unhappy! She's suffered enough. You're evilly rubbing your hands together right now, aren't you?

*"He basked in the wonderment of his luck

I'm not sure what to say about Sirius. He's become such a monster that I wonder if he's become possessed by one of those alien pod invaders and the real Sirius is dead. I just hope that he pays for his crimes and Kreacher gets it twice as bad. I'm really starting to worry about Remus and the way he's becoming aroused just by the thought of using Hermione. Is Kreacher still managing to get into his head or is that mad house elf going around spiking the food? Or has the stress simply become too much and Remus is starting to have a nervous breakdown? Have Ron and Ginny taken vows also or is just the threat of their relationship being outed enough to keep them in line. If so, what will it take before one of them has had enough and decides to hell with the consequences they're telling someone? Whatever happens the Weasley children are going to be plenty screwed up. I can just see Molly dulling her favorite carving knife for castration purposes. At least the Headmaster and Snape are getting an idea of what is going on. I wonder how Snape will get out of using Hermione, but maybe he can use her advanced pregnancy to his advantage. Still I'm wondering just what Bella is up to. I can't help but think she has some ulterior motive other than boredom and randiness. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Well I don't blame Remus since I can't help but think of him as a rape victim too, but I wish he could find some way to let someone know about Hermione. Somewhere, in the back of my mind, I keep thinking I should feel some sympathy for Sirius and how he's been driven insane by the brainwashing of Kreacher, but I just can't bring myself to feel it. It doesn't help that Sirius has never been a favorite of mine. All I can think is that Remus managed to throw off Kreacher's subliminal teachings and recognize it for what it was, so why can't Sirius? I know I'm possibly being unfair to Sirius, but I keep thinking his appointment with the veil can't come soon enough, but then, without Sirius what will happen to Hermione? So the baby is the next chapter. I'm looking forward to that, but I wonder where Hermione will be when that happens. In the slave room or with Bella?

Poor Remus! An interesting descent into madness for Sirius. What a psycho, especially since they forced that potion on Remus. I would love to see Remus go full on werewolf on his ass and rip his nasty throat out! I guess he doesn't understand the concept of playing with fire. But no one ever said he was particularly smart did they...

Since chapter 26 is already written, does that mean you are gonna post it soon.... Please, please...

Well, Stockholm-Syndrome is similar to any other illness. It seldom represents itself in the pure, undiluted typical way. If an abduct has more than one abductor, and one of them is treating her 'kindly' while the others only torture her, she will get attached only to the 'kind' abductor. And, in a way, even Remus is a kind of 'abductor' to her, for all means and purposes.

And 'your' Sirius has gone completely mad in Azkaban. And Kreacher is working overtime in HIS madness. Long parts of this chapter I skipped over, they were just too sick to be bearable. I know it's an effect you wanted to achieve, but still... I hope you won't make this last as long as Fritzl tortured his poor daughter. If you intend to make this torture much longer, I'm going to keep on skipping most of the chapters.

PS: But of course there is a way to review the terms of the wow and let someone know. The solution for both is called Pensive.

I adore Remus and even play him at HP cons, he is my man, but I also loved this chapter. It was chock full of angst and drama. I can't wait for the birth and do so wonder whether you shall show us all the Order meeting that followed, but I guess that is inconsquential.

I wonder where Hermione shall have the baby? Whether it be at Bella's house, or in the slave room? I guess it is anyones guess at this stage in time. I just can't see Hermione getting out of this ok, seriously if I had to go through something like this I doubt whether I would be sane when all was said and done.

Lovely, just lovely.

Love Sonia :)

Wow That was an awesome chapter! You really pulled it together. Poor Remus I feel sorry for him. Love the incorporation of "Oh yes you will" And how far can Kreacher spread his bad vibes! Wow!

RE: chapter 25

Woah, Remus is a stud in a half, hey? I wouldn't be unhappy to have him come knocking at my door. Know what I mean?
;~D

Very sexy action with Remus, I especially liked it when he was telling Sirius that Hermione was his (Remus') now--COOL!

Well done--keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to additional chapters.
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