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Labor--have read several stories about labor and very interesting how it's handled differently by all. One where she had baby at Hogwarts with Poppy and when done Poppy told father she was all healed for that night. Ewwww! Last thing I'd want after a day giving birth. You went the other way with no magic involved.
I started reading this for the SS/HG pairing, but honestly now, am dreading that unless Severus is able to do something regarding rescue. At this point though, would keep reading whatever way it goes.
Read several reviews who complained about chapter length. I read very fast and like the length of these chapters.
Ron's daughter seems to be a perfect control for Hermoine's outbursts. Seems too good a blackmail tool for Kreacher and Sirius.
It's hard for me to read this and not hope for several deaths! For example, Kreacher.
Is Sirius going to the Dept. of Mysteries? Is he dying soon?
I do not believe that St. Mungo's has an adequate psychiatric ward to handle all the people who have been messed up like this.
Checking daily for updates! Please don't stop writing. You have a story that needs to be finished. Don't leave us hanging.
Thanks for writing, again.

Wonderful chapter! You did an excellent job of working through things! I am so glad that Albus knows what is up! Kudos on such a fast chapter!

RE: chapter 26

I'm sorry... I'm such a perv, but I absolutely adore Remus and his increased libido and reactions to thinking about her, or when he hears her name, etc. I can't help it if I feel that he is a sexy beast that I wouldn't mind doing naughty things with.
*SMIRK* *LEER*
;~D

Well done--keep up the good work!

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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

1) 'Sirius ["Sirius" should be "Severus"] stiffened slightly when Lucius mentioned the name of his own sister-in-law, ...'

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That was a surprise! Great job! I loved Molly coming in for the rescue! Can't Dobby kill Kreacher or something? Jeez!

"Labor Ne Plus Ultra" - Labor of a most profound or intense degree. You said it. Much better title than "Labor So Bad I'm Going to Make Sure You Never Want to Give Birth...Ever." There's so much I could say about the birth, but Hermione said it best with the multiple "Ows!" throughout.

*Sirius continues to remain a bastard, but I'm so glad he's beginning to doubt himself and his negative emotions towards Hermione. I'm keeping my fingers crossed he'll start to see the error of his ways soon.

*"brightened up at the thought that elves could at least use their own special magic to Apparate within the castle walls without detection." So basically the kids aren't even safe at Hogwarts. Crap.

*"And she's falling apart after just a few contractions? Gods, this is going to fucking suck!

Oh my, you did stun me with that delivery. Two babies, each from different fathers. I thought Sirius must be sterile or something, perhaps from Azkaban.

Damn Kreacher and his stupid elf body. I never liked even Dobby and couldn't understand why everyone cried when he died in book 7. I surely didn't shed a tear.

I wonder if Hermione will go back to Bella's? Will Molly get Oblivated or will she also take a vow? I shall not even hazard to guess the babies names, but please tell me that Hermione won't name Ron's girl Rose!?

Love Sonia :)

This fic holds an odd place in my mind. It's the story that made me realise that perhaps I was reading too much 'porn' - and definitely too much of this kind. I felt I was somehow starting to condition myself to expect/respond to a certain kind of treatment, which wasn't entirely fair to me. And I resolved to just stop reading anything involving non-con at all. However, I left this after chapter 3, and I couldn't stand not knowing what happened. So maybe as you conclude this I can get some closure, I don't know. It is very well written though, and you got at least one person to think, though perhaps not in the exact way you wanted. Thankyou.

Wow that was an INTENSE chapter! You did a Great job on blending it together! on to the next chapter!

Hmm, well maybe Sirius has redeemed himself a little bit in trying to think for himself and throw off Kreacher's teachings, however I think he's had more than his share of fun for his life so maybe Molly can make it a nice sharp knife instead of a dull one. Will Molly be obliviated and will it really take if certain strong emotions are involved or will there be a sort of ghost in the mind? I'm hoping that the birth of his daughter will change how he thinks about women and Hermione especially. After all, how would he feel if it were his daughter who'd been kidnapped and turned into a sex slave? Will Kreacher be able to exert the same influence now that Sirius has a daughter to think of? Kreacher is going to be a problem, yes he is.

Found your story recently and am now up to date. First--Thanks for the decent grammar and spelling. It makes a difference to me to read, a big difference. Sorry to anyone else but that's the way I was brought up. Second, I'm very disturbed by your story. Disturbed in a good way in that I can't wait for more. Please keep writing. Your comments about wanting people to see the other side is so right. I'm kind of scared to think where you are going with this but I'll take the ride. I'll review from here on out if you'll continue the story to the end. Thanks