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December 31, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Please, please finish!!!!
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November 15, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Finish this...PLEASE!!!!!
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October 29, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Where is the rest of it, please???!!!!
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December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good to see another chapter!
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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I hope you don't take this wrong, but I wanted to point out that your translation of the story title is incorrect. Your title as it is actually translates to "Criminal of the Heart". If you want your title to be "Crimes of the Heart" in Italian then the translation would be "Crimini del Cuore". I only wanted to point this out because it helps you be more credible as a writer to throughly check your sources, especially for translations for languages you don't speak. Anyway, this was in no way meant to discourage you or be mean. Just a helpful little heads up.
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May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is my first review... I actually was inspired to register on aff so I could comment specifically on this story. I really like it! Please keep writing, I love reading it.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I don't want to be the noisy know it all but I'd like to know it if I was the author so I'm telling you this, don't take it badly, please, and if you don't care just diregard this comment^^
If you wanted to translate Crimes of the Heart in Italian, it should be "Crimini del cuore".
The other sentence doesn't really make much sense and "di le" sounds really bad.
But as I said, it's just a pieceful of advice :).
If you wanted to translate Crimes of the Heart in Italian, it should be "Crimini del cuore".
The other sentence doesn't really make much sense and "di le" sounds really bad.
But as I said, it's just a pieceful of advice :).