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for The Black Heir

by gpsassi

person godofj
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please write more i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
On FF.net this story has 68 chapters. Are the chapters here more explicit with violence & sexual situations or does the story stand as written before and you're posting here in a series format?
I do like this story by the way. I started reading it on the other site (only on chapter 12 though).
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please MORE!! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next part...
person Elfin69
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful fic and I hope that you update again soon. I would not mind seeing Voldemort and Orion get together in the next couple of years and that the Malfoy's realize that Orion and Draco are not going to make a match (even if Tom has to step in). I do hope that Orion will reveal to Tom (at least) that he is actually Harry and what really happened to him. Please don't wait to long to update again.
person MrGalion
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story. I await the next update.
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this story just blew me away. I read the first chapter and was like I can't read it Harry's not Harry. But then it was nagging at me all day peeking my interest and by the time I got home I had to read more. It took me two days to read all that you have done so far and I was captivated. I even tried to distract my self when reading the latest chapter cause I didn't know when you would up-date again, and I wanted to savour it tell the very last sentence. I love everything about the story the plot and A/U and that everything fits and nothing is rushed. Truly I can't wait for more of this brilliant story.
person Jan
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Awesome story! I can't wait to see what's going to happen now that Hermione knows a bit about the dark wizards and witches ^_^ Will she and Viktor be the first muggle and dark blood to mingle?

I can't wait for the tournament to commence!

Please update chapter 23 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My god. I really dont know how to express what this story makes me feel. I love it. Sirius's "death" was unavoidable... irritating and upsetting, but unavoidable. I love Lezander's character. he is a wonderful oc. Please continue to write and update soon. Thank you.

~Sophie Max-Anderson



== This is a very well written story, and with English not being your native tongue.... I am impressed, to say the least. This piece reads like a very intriguing novel. Sophie couldn't stop reading for anything. She hasn't eaten anything at all since she started reading the first chapter at 7pm this evening. It is now 12:35am on the same evening. This story is very very very well done. We await the next chapter, reluctantly.

--Rikash Moonsword.
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic! I love the fact that you haven't made Harry, or Orion, too dark, or the dark purebloods too wimpy and 'misunderstood'. I love this story and hope that you continue it soon! I'll keep my eyes out for an update.
person Winters Prologue
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have this posted as complete but considering it is a HPLV story and you haven't really gotten into their relationship I deduce that its incomplete? Anyways email me when you update this fic, I was getting right into it, though I don't like the idea of Harry becomming a Necromancer, its too overdone and leaves too much room to make a character extra-powerful.