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Is this all? It says complete but I know it's not. Are you going to finish this? I love the whole idea of Harry being Sirius' son and Dark ^_^ Hope you have more K

this is undoubtably the best fanfiction i've ever read on this site (well equaling with the one about harry and Lucius Malfoy being head of the wereleopards) NONE the less, this is a fantastically original piece with os much description and in depth detail that it simply spins my mind.

i would enjoy, obviously, more chapters because i love it so (cookies to you XD)

oooh oh!!! i want to know if Sirius wil ever be 'found' if you catch my drift on the soul part :P very shocking that, i thought that Harry, sorry Orion, would get there in time.
i love the way you couple the tragedy with a celebratory event i.e the balls and etc, really raher refreashing having a subtle amount of good ad bad things.
i love the fact that Orion is still humane and Lyzanders vision was disturbing.

would that be Orion if he managed to aquire the three objects to enable him to become the one and only Master of Death ?

much love

keep writing :)

xxx

I am looking for a Harry/Voldemort or Harry/Tom fan fiction. I can

i love this story.."crazy portraits that should mind their own buisness" haha love it!!

this is an awesome story!

sorry i haven't been reviewing every chapter, but i just couldn't stop reading!! this is soo good, i love this story!

This is absolutely phenomenal! Really good detail. I have to admit I want to see Orion's attempts to ressurect Sirius fail -- not because I don't like him or want him to be alive, but really because it just seems a little bit too convenient. I hope that you post more soon! ~M

WOW I found this story about 3 days ago and just finished reading chapter 26. The first thing I want to say is that I really love this story. Next is that in reading some of your replies to other interested readers I wanted to comment, just because this is under the Harry/Tom subsection that does not mean they have to have sex. I have read several very good stories under Harry/Snape where Snape is the father and not the lover. This subtitle mearly implies interaction between the two, whatever that may be. Next I love the dark Harry but I personally feel that he is being sucked in by good old Voldie and needs to be wary. You have written this plot perfectly. Love the Lez and Harry interaction. Harry always needed to know the soft side of love and Lez is really showing him that, but like most abused children, he doesn't understand it fully and may even be a little afraid of the happiness it gives because he feels it will be yanked away from him when he least expects it and will have to deal with the heartache. He at least understands this more from Voldemort in he understands him better even with the conflicting emotions. I am still curious as to what you will do the the deathly hollows and the portkey. I really feel that Harry will eventually become strong enough to defeat Voldemort and create a more peaceful alliance with all dark and light creatures. Lupin seems to be much happier in no longer denying his true self. I believe in that we can all learn a lesson. Be true to yourself. Harry is so far above his years in his thinking and strategies for the war. Of course he has never been a allowed to have a real childhood.
As far as Sirius is concerned, I think Harry is so powerful that all he needs to do is shout "Accio Sirus Black's soul" and wait for it to come flying though the air and just place it back into his mouth. Wouldn't that give Dumbledore something to think about. Could he have Sirus arrested again if he found out he was 'alive and with a soul' once more? Certainly it would give Voldemort something to think about. It amazes me how some things can be so simple and people make them so complicated. I am hoping that if Harry learns to apparate he can visit Lezander this coming summer and get away from all of the war turmoil and his Aunt Bella's training for a short while. Salazar has already told him how to hide his magical signature so maybe that would be possible without anyone being able to follow him. Of course he needs to take off his ring so Voldemort can't summon him either. Then maybe he could spend some of his summer in the Chamber of Secrets too. Just apparate to Hogsmead and get in the other entrance from outside Hogwarts wards. The same way that Voldemort left after sucking Ginny's life force so he could have a body. So many possiblities, that is why I just love fanfiction. Hope you update soon.

I was a bit unsure about this story at first. I'm not a big Harry/Voldemort person but I have to say you have a great story going. Most people rush into the relationships or make them unrealisticly powerful but I can actually see this timeline happening in the real books. I can't wait to read more!

hey,
this was a brillant story, but is it really finised of just abandoned, cause if its really finished, thats a strange way of finishing a story!
is there going to be a sequel?
furanuchan@hotmail.com
Kya