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that was great. Now hurry up an finish your other stories so you can get back to ss/hg.

Awwwwwwww. What a wonderful, cute, sweet story. I loved this so so much. THANK YOU for sharing it. I can't wait to read more of your stories!

I loved this one. It was just so damn good and I do love such a sexy Snape. I'm sad it's ended cos I love reading your stories. I can't wait to read your new Lumione even if it's going to be angsty. Roll on sunday!

Hey, no apologies needed, even with sperm as the leading factor. ha ha ha It was sweet and nice. Thank you. It was just what I needed and it was wonderfully done. :-) HG4eva

This was a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it. I thought the ending was great the way Eve got into trouble, but didn't get punished for it. That shows she has her father totally wrapped around her finger.

I loved this story but then again I love all your stories xxxx

cannot wait for the new Lumione story xxxx

lmao i love how he is such a softie! lol that was a great story

I love this story. I couldn't stop reading it. It's sad that it's ending soon, but looking forward to glance into their future. Again great story.

I have really enjoyed reading this story. I liked the over all plot of the ghost meddling in her attempts to have an unknown donner.

Great story. I love the interaction between Severus and Hermione as they deal with the results of the mix up. I also appreciate your characterization of Harry. It is refreshing to see him as accepting the situation with grace and laughter instead of railing against Snape. I would suggest that you go back through to edit. I noticed quite a few errors in using plural possesives especially the use of student's (1 studnent) vs. students'(belonging to multiple students). Please also review correct punctuation for dialog. If the quoted remarks end with a period but you are going to add a tag after then drop the period and use a comma. For example: "I want that," she said.