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for The Potions Master's Baby

by soldiersgirl0709

person Sheena
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey just re-read this story however wehere does the medling ghost come into this story ( you mentioned it in the summery)
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I've been waiting for what felt like forever! The story is great so far and I cannot wait to read more. Excellent work.
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, once again they've got the cart before the horse, which in their case is about the only way they could manage, really. But which ghost is going to be meddling? Nick? The Baron? Peeves isn't really a ghost, after all. C'mon, give us a hint? New chapter would be better, though.
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SG you are a goddess, what a wonderful begining! It was fabulous!

I loved the sperm talk LMAO, in the first chapter, but I already told you about that LOL

I really loved Harry in this, he's either and whiner, or a winger, and I loved the different version you have of him!

Sevvie...Where do I start, hes just YUMMY *licks lips* MMMM!

These chapters where delightful and I can't wait for more!

Love,

V x
person cnor9602
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. As usual, you know I can't wait for more. How far out does this go? Just through the pregnancy? The child's Hogwarts Years? Will there be more children? I mean, there can be nothing better then the image of Sev holding a baby. The stuff of fantasies!!
person wishyouwere
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am so glad to see that you have done another Severus and Hermione story!!! of course, making us wait a couple of days for an update is mean (wish pouts). Is there anything we can do to get you to give us a couple of chapters at a time? Shameless flattery? Constant ego stroking?

One thing that I like about your stories is that if I want to go back and have a good read, your's are some of my reread favourites. Although SS/HG is my favourite pairing, your LM/HG tales could make me change my mind!

I can't wait for the next update!
person dracoloveemmy
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My' I love this story please update soooon' PLEASEEe''^_^

Esmeralda,
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! another story by you!




Yeah! Another story by you!! :D :D :D You're one of my all time favorite writers. Including published authors. I'm hoping that you start publishing your own work soon too. Shoot me an email if you have anything out there. :D







schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. please please update soon .. later for now

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person DRanged691
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!! It is often hard to find a fic with both great writing and an original plot. This is the fic I've been waiting for!