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for The Potions Master's Baby

by soldiersgirl0709

person LilCorinthian
schedule April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I was just going to lurk and not review, but after reading this fic straight through for the last hour and a half, I couldn't not let you know how awesome it was. I'm still relatively new to the good ship Snape/Hermione, but with fics like this, it's easy to see why the ship is so popular. This was great! Smut aside (which was *hot* :0P), the plot was adorable, and I love love LOVE the idea of Daddy!Snape. However, it was each and every discussion of Harry's sperm that cracked me up. Poor Boy-Who-Lived-To-Procreate. :0D Job well done, and thank you so much for sharing this! :0)
schedule October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know, this is the third of your stories I have read in a row now (this time, I have read them all before, some more than once). I wanted to read "The Bond" (absolutely love that story) once more, and while scrolling down the list of your stories I found more "old friends" I had to read over again. I just love your stories, you write the characters so well, you always manage to use a plot that is yours, and you always finish what you starts. For an avid reader that last part is like gold.
My next stroll down memory lane will be "Heat", "Matched" or "The Healing" I think, it is such a luxery to twidle between several wonderful stories, knowing that whichever you chose, you will have a grand time reading.
Brilliant work, absolutely brilliant!
person Tzentel
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on an excellent story! You kept both Severus and Hermione in character, but bought out a lovely relationship. Well done :)
person Itsa Riddle
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so so sooooooo good. I loved this story. Great job, I love happy endings, and lets face it Snape really deserves one. I like to think that Snape didn't die and that he had a bezoar or some form of a potion...because ugh! He can't be dead! Anywho I loved your story. Well done!

Thanks for the great read,

Itsa Riddle
person russellMrs
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was an exceptionally fun story! I loved it! Thank you very much.
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very very good story extremely funny and so well written to keep my attention through until the very end and all in one evening you are a very good writer keep up the good work vicky
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying this fic so far.
You did ask your readers for their opinions on Richie - mine is that there's nothing wrong with him that a beheading couldn't cure
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Best lines:





“When I look at you I see many things. I see a little bushy haired know it all who disrupted my classes and often poked her nose where it didn’t belong. I see a warrior on the battlefield fighting gloriously for what she believed was right, a reluctant heroine standing beside her friends accepting accolades she didn’t want because she was only doing what needed to be done. I see a young woman broken and crying for the loss of her love and a phoenix rising up from the ashes to reclaim her life. I see a teacher who is loved by her students, who encourages them and guides them with a firm yet loving hand. Yes, I look at you and I see the mother of my child, even if it was an accident and I was reluctant to accept it. But I also see a woman, intelligent, passionate, beautiful, desirable, a woman I am proud to call mine.” He whispered the words with his eyes closed, feeling every one of them as they were spoken. He felt her trembling in his arms. She was weeping. “I’m sorry, I’m not good with words and they came out wrong…”
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Flatulence potion?
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, this was just wonderful! I got teary eyed when baby Snape was born--brought me back to my own labors and the feeling of overwhelming love that consumes you when you first see those scrunched little faces. Now, off to read more of your work!!