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for The Potions Master's Baby

by soldiersgirl0709

person dracoloveemmy
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yess' me love the update i love it thank you ,' But I would be more Happy if you give me some more PLEASE' hehe' Now,

Update soon luv,

Esmeralda^_^
person MomoDesu
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, the horny months. Love it.

I highly doubt you will disappoint. I've read and adored all of your other SS/HG stories, so the possibility of this one disappointing is very slim.
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! On days I see a new story posted by you, it is like getting a surprise present. You weren't expecting it (hoping maybe), but you know that when you tear into it - it will be wonderful! You never disappoint! And Sev IS cute! Let the spankings commence! ;)
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter - thanks so much for that! I was reading some of your reviews and wanted to echo the comments about the originality of the story line. I was just wondering where the idea came from. I want to say thanks to for waiting to post until after the story is complete. I am one of the naughty girls who just started writing and posting. The story is almost done, but I am a little caught on how to wrap it up. I have started working on the next one, which I think has an original twist on the marriage law. But this one will not be posted until it is finished! Ok, is there any chance of at least getting a new chapter each day???? Please!!!!!
PS. This angsty fic that is in progress - who is the pairing?
person ginnyginny
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
as always, i am hooked on this story already. i love the premise of hermione wanting to be a mother, but after losing the man she loved (i still don't think she and ron are good together), she takes matters into her own hands. poor sev...a father without the desire to be one. he's behaving wonderfully, though...a bit too much. i wonder if things are going to sneak up on him soon?

can't wait for the next chapter or for the next story. i hope the gh/lm story will have a happy ending, like the rest of those you have written...

schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhh Albus is a ghost eh?? now your story description begins to make sense. Poor Poppy she is feeling guilty because the old goat likes to meddle.

Absolutely love the humour, should try not to drink my tea while reading though, during the whole Potter episode I had tea spewing everywhere. You have a great talent for writing, thank you again.

Lu
person Mirror
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Albus... he switched it?
Sneaky bugger.
He'll be lucky he's already dead if Sev ever finds out.
Keep it up!
person Kristic
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tears!! I was in tears after reading chapter 6. I absolutely LOVED the way you wrote the Potters in this chapter. Hermione's Lick and Run had me laughing hysterically . . . and Harry's reaction to Hermione's crush on the Professor when they were in school.

schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Post again soon. I really am likning this story. The plot and the ways the characters are portrait are done beautifully. Excusee my spelling. I can wait to see more interactiion with our favorite couple. I really love the kindness snape is showing =)
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I finally found some time to sit down and read, and I find a brand new story from you. Life is good. LOL! I have to tell you that I was never a big fan of Snape/Hermione, but I love reading yours. Guess it's the awesome writing. =)

Harry is cracking me up in this story. I love the banter you have going between them, it's so real. And his revulsion of anything Snape-ish is so funny! Lick and run. *heehee*

The new story sounds intriguing, and I absolutely LOVE LM/HG so I will be anxiously awaiting that one!