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for The Potions Master's Baby

by soldiersgirl0709

person neelix
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is just too perfect - I am loving every second - please please... post again soon!!!
person Gertie
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Indeed, if Snape were to kiss me like that I would give him anything and everything he asked for. Oh swoon! I love the story so far, and I really love the characterization of Harry in this. It's nice to think of him as being a good friend and laughing with her instead of being the opposition.
The Hermoine in my head is a hybrid of the Hermoine I originally pictured reading the books, and bits of Emma. Not quite either, just a mix.
person chloe
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i lover your stories. this one is another great one in the making. can't wait to read more
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter. update soon!
person smoky heather
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is wonderful, i really like seeing another side to severus ^^ more please! -x-
person Althea
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am very glad that you decided to take a break from Lucius and are now writing Severus. I have been so bored with the Severus/Hermione lately and I was getting so frustrated that there was never anything good written. This story is written very cleverly in its humorous-ness. I love the idea that an unexpected pregnancy starts a relationship between the two. Very comical in its unconventionality. Great job, keep writing.
~Misery
Would you be willing to send out an e-mail when you up-date please? wpjn_sanderson@hotmail.com
person noeby
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ha ha, the horny months. Yep. cute idea for a fic.
person kittycat30
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I'm so happy to see another story by you! I have obviously missed the beginning. So far, it's great! I like that Severus admits to having a heart at the end. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
person missgranger
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this idea! Too funny!
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have read them all up to now....beautiful story so far xxxxx im addicted to your stories xxxx i read them at least 4 times or more 10/10