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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just finished your Quidditch game chapter. I love the rumor mill and the what-will-they-tell-everyone problem. Her licking his lips is hilarious. One nitpick--a writer at some point pointed out that Severus probably likes Quidditch to some extent if he's actually qualified to referee Quidditch games.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch-6. Harry cracks me up, this is a good version of him, not angry and annoyed but at peace and happy. Good to see Interferring Albus making an appearance. Of course he would be following them around the halls making sure they get together. Hermione and Sev need to get together now before she gets too big to make it difficult.LOL.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch-7. Oh devine kissing by the potion master. Gorgeous chapter, makes me want more, quick get to writing. Have I ever told you how much I love your Sev fics? (Yes you reply, so shut up now.) Are you able to do me a little favour? If you haven't planned to already could you write some chapters with Sev interacting with his child? Everyone stops writing after the baby is born and I would love to see him playing with his little girl or teaching his young son some potions.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus. He needs to learn to handle the pressure of nosy friends to be with Hermoine. I love happy Harry, smiling and at home with his family. Snape should be taking notes -not that he would ever admit to doing it.
You made me do a little happy dance with the news about the Remus fic. I am re-reading Heat for about the millionth time. I really think it is my favorite fic ever. They're really aren't enough Remus stories. But I understand how naughty little Slytherins can commandeer the imagination.
You made me do a little happy dance with the news about the Remus fic. I am re-reading Heat for about the millionth time. I really think it is my favorite fic ever. They're really aren't enough Remus stories. But I understand how naughty little Slytherins can commandeer the imagination.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story as usual. Whenever I need a good story I go and read one of yours. I always know that I will get a happy ending... NOW you are working on a new Remus story???!!! Excellent.. chocolate frogs for you!!!!
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Did I say Sev was cute? I meant to say adorable. He is just precious when he is flustered. I also wanted to give you a quick word of support on the height difference. My daughter is five foot nothing and I
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i sooooo.....can't wait to read more. i think you write such a good severus snape:)
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha, your comment is hilarious i totally understand though, Rickman is like sex on a stick especially with that voice. oooooh. ive seen a ton of his movies and no matter who he plays its sexy. lol. now i wanna watch sense and sensibility. dang it.
i love jealous Snape, he's so cute lol if you can use the word cute to describe him, which I doubt he would approve of. lol.
interesting OMC. he's very curious. can't wait to see how you develop him more.
Awesome job, keep it up!
i love jealous Snape, he's so cute lol if you can use the word cute to describe him, which I doubt he would approve of. lol.
interesting OMC. he's very curious. can't wait to see how you develop him more.
Awesome job, keep it up!
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus! He just kisses the mother of his child for the first time and already people are asking when the wedding is! Oh, and I see such trouble coming from that original character of yours. Should be interesting. Great writing and please, if you can that is, update today! If not (boo-whoo), I'm sure I can hold back my sarrows until Tuesday. LOL!
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
brilliant chapter, a jealous snape sounds really funny.
update soon
update soon