AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for The Potions Master's Baby

by soldiersgirl0709

person Linneh
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wondeful! I think the Severus/Hermione relationship is soo funny., you portrayed them very nicely! Good job. And thanks for updating so regularly,.It's so annoying when fanfics leave you hanging in the middle of a wonderful story. Veeery nice! /cheer
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to find a new Severus/Hermione story written by you:-)) This ligth story is just what I needed to read now, I just adore it. I admit I am a sucker for Hermione having Severus babies stories:-))))
I look forward to read more!
person neelix
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't sleep, so got out of bed at 2 a.m. for a mooch, and I am so glad i did!!

I love your Harry and I totally agree it's time he was allowed to be happy after all the angst. And Richie is great - although my neighbour shares his name and isn't so great :( .... I'll try and overlook that!!

Looking forward to Tuesday.... *walks away humming*
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great story! I look forward to your work so much. I even go back and re-read them when you're working on new ones. I love this story line, I'm a sucker for baby stories. Its like being a really great aunt, I can enjoy the darlings until they get messy, then I can give them back to Mummy LOL. And you write incredible love scenes. If I had met someone who could kiss like that 35 years ago...!
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Terrific story!

JKR wrote the Chocolate Frog Card captions so Hooch is definitely Rolanda.
person Angelbaby
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch-2. Poor Sevvy I can't even imagin what that situation would be like. To find out someone was having your baby. He didn't even have the fun of making it. Poor Hermione what a shock that would be. The child of someone you don't even like. This is going to be a great fic, I love it already. Off to chapter three.....
person Angelbaby
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch-3. "MINE" ohh yumminess. I would dream about Snape saying that to me too. The scene behind the blackboard was fab and I laughed out loud at how annoyed Severus would be at the kids thinking he was snogging behind there, ha.
person Angelbaby
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch-4 He gave her his blueberry muffin, could there be anything sweeter?
person Angelbaby
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch-5. Ah so Hermione has fallen under the spell of hot yummy Severus. I totally understand her predicament I imagine it would be difficult for any woman to control. I love how you write this Sev. He's himself: quiet, withdrawn and sarcastic but oh so polite and sweet. Don't you think random sweetness makes it so much more sweet because it's unexpected?