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for The Potions Master's Baby

by soldiersgirl0709

person smmz79
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhh he cares... i love it... and poor hermione throwing up in severus' sink while he had a class..... i loved when she was eyeing his scone and he passed it to her how cute...
person neelix
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely update! I loved tearful pregnant Hermione and the torn stockings - I remember it so well!
person smmz79
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhh i love a concerned severus... and hermione LICKED severus way to go.....
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, her passionate defense outranks her having his child in his eyes? Severus had better hang on to her with both hands; as we say America, "this One's a keeper!"
person makaem
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I'm so glad I found it.
person smmz79
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG by far this is my favorite chap... seriously i think i laughed so hard that i cried and almost peed on myself... i love a lighthearted harry so often i read in snape/hermione fics that harry is upset and against their relationship but i love him here...he was great i loved it when she was telling them and harry was like 'hang on.... repeat that...' it was great.... i loved that he could not stop laughing poor hermione she was upset and he was dying from laughter... another part that had me laughing was the sight that i envisioned of severus reading a pregnancy book... omg that was great you are a genius did you know that.... i love it... i can just imagine the looks he was getting from the cashier when he was paying for the book... oh and albus is a ghost why do i have a sneaky feeling that he had way more t do with this than he is letting on to severus
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic update! It is so wonderful to read stories like this inbetween all those with a lot of angst, terror, sorrow, injustice etc etc etc, especially when it is so well written as your stories are:-))
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just loved your last chapter! You picked the perfect song. I just love "Have You Ever Really Loved A Woman." I would love to slow dance with Severus!
person Gertie
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah Albus, you troublesome old goat, how I love you. I loved Hermoine's dress. I have a magazine cutout from when I was in middleschool I use as a bookmark that looks just like what you described. I hate that the other teachers would be so outwardly nasty towards Severus, but that's the way of things sometimes isn't it? It's a shame people can't see past to how happy they are.