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omg what a great chap... ok so i have not reviewed for a couple of chapters so i am going to make a few comments... richie is hysterical i like that he is so animated yet very powerful with the dark arts... it is easy to characterize people but honestly that may not be true at all.. also i love harrys reaction when he saw severus with hermione... 'you brought a date'... and hermiones response of glaring at him in a way to make him think she was mentally flipping him off... loved that... OMG i laughed so hard when hermione and severus exited the carriage to realize that the students were all waiting for them... that was great... and now to this chap... first off severus helping hermione with her stocking how sweet is that and then everyones reactions i like that hermione was sticking up for severus... ok now to my fave part besides the end when severus realized that hermione was meant for him.... when albus almost let it slip that he messed up the sperm... oh that was good and he was like i swear the gray lady is calling me that was good i love it... great job please update soon... :-)

This was a great chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

Oh I love that song!
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Update soon!

Chapter 11:

Great Chapter - I really loved the Hogwarts equivalent of swapping keys with your partner - swapping passwords. I also didn't suspect the staff's reaction to the baby as of being about marriage. Hermione and Severus are very sweet together :)

I like it. Please update soon.

Great new chapter! I loved how you had Albus almost spilling the beans. Poor Hermione. Hormones are a pain aren't they? excellent writing and I cannot wait to read more.
P.S. Thanks for the review. It means so much to me.

What a cute story. I like the slightly less "sex god" Severus. He's just so sweet. Yummm
Having said that, isn't it time for him to claimhis witch? I'm surprised that she hasn't just jumped him. The hormones must be raging right about now!

Can't wait for the update!!

oh this is going to be good... my dear ever since i read you draco/hermione story... something in the way she moves... i have been addicted to your writing so i am going to try to catch up but so far this looks really good... i can not wait till all is revealed

interesting... very well done... i like how hermione and severus handled the news i wonder where this is going to take them

i love this story! keep up the great writing