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for The Potions Master's Baby

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An elf with Mardi Gras beads! I love it! If she wants szechuan I hope he can speak chinese!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person smmz79
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chap... as always... wow hermione is definitely laying claim... poor thing is having doubt.... great job i am totally looking forward to the next chap
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious! I liked Hermione's unabashed shopping spree and the nice little ego stroking Severus got out of it. Lucky bastard, indeed.

Somehow I got a feeling that Lisette is going to run right to Rita Skeeter.
person KellyJCR
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when the bumps in the road would appear. I know Hermione analyzes everything to death so this is going to be a difficult journey dealing with his past and such. Unfortunatly Severus, content though he may be might overlook this fact and I fear things might go a little south before turning up again. Love the thought of Severus shopping in a lingere store that was a picture in my head that had me laughing. I am looking forward to and patiently waiting for your new story it sounds wonderful and congrats on finishing it. Can't wait for the next update. Well done!!!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"We just live in sin." rofl. so perfect. they are so adorable together, they both get so excited about the simplest things, so cute. that Lisette girl what a skeeze (sp?) bleh! but yay for more, i love it.
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
such a good chapter to read. I loved seeing hermione stick up and claim Severus. Can't wait for more.
person neelix
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this update...and the new fic sounds inruiging too!

Look forward to the updates... great work honey x
person Gertie
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I suppose it was Hermoine's turn to have a go at self doubt. Poor dear, but showing up the hag in the department store should have felt pretty damn good. I love that she made sure to tighten the shirt. A friend of mine is pregnant and I am going to get her a similar shirt off Cafe Press. Not so sure her husband will approve.
person carha
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love seeing Hermione take out her jealousy on an unsuspecting victim! Great chapter hun, looking forward to those promised lemons!