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for The Potions Master's Baby

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Angelbaby
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You painted on a dark mark? Way cool! Hope you and yours had a great Halloween, some are trying to start it here in OZ but I think it's just 'cause we like the idea of free lollies. Fab chapter (as usual) your Severus is melting me. *sigh*

Curious - did you make your own costume or can you buy deatheater robes? How many kids must go around every year now as Hogwarts students. Sounds like fun I love any excuse to dress up.
person KellyJCR
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Those two are naughty beyond reason. I love it!!. Looking forward to more. Well done and Happy Halloween!!!!!!
person lu
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you don't disappoint, still loving it. Think I would pay good money to see you all dressed up as a Death Eater!!!!

Lu
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Deatheater costume??? Love it!!
I, myself am going to be a saucy witch!! Hopefully I'll find my own Severus tonight!!

Anyways, the chapter..... I could see the scene clearly in my mind it sounds lovely. That Albus!! He's a hoot!!

Hope you and the kids are well!!
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chappie. Totally works. You had to know that Albus would spill his guts to someone sooner or later! Excellent work. Happy Halloween!
person smmz79
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chap.. i love that albus admitted it to minerva... it was funny the chewing she gave him.... great scene witht he ice cream... loved it and that they may be scene how hot...
person neelix
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can we see a photo of that? You in the Death eater garb, I mean? lol

Great update - alfresco frolicking is always fun.... although you missed a trick with the icecream there!!!
person Ink
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! ;)

Somehow I get really pissed when former lovers of Severus make an appearance! Don't make her threaten their relationship!! Pwease 0.0 *puppydogeyes*
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I wonder if Minerva will tell Hermione that Albus was the one who meddle with the vials making her end up with Severus' own sample. I look forward to reading the next chapter.