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for The Potions Master's Baby

by soldiersgirl0709

person shelagh
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amen on the normal! My first was 23 hours of labor after my water broke and my second was 27 hours after my water broke. Never again!!!! LOL
person amsev
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was when it happened. Severus Snape
person DB1
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@16 awsome chapter. cant wait for mroe


*DB*
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh SG this was such a beautiful chapter!! The birth was eventful and I hope in the end Harry does win Severus over!

I loved this story right from the word go! It has been one of your absolute best!

With love,

Vic x
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im so happy they had a girl!
person Muffy
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely realistic birth. I loved Severus' emotions. Well done. Thanks for the updates.
person KellyJCR
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You had to end it there didn't you! Can't wait for the littlest Snape to join the story. I feel for your bladder issues during pregnancy but I had a drooling problem. It was way to hard to pass of as anything else. Looking forward to the rest. Well done!!!!
person Sheena
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, con't wait till you update, baby snape is comming

Great story, UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to the next chapter.
person MomoDesu
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There are two new babies in my family, so this chapter brings back some memories and laughs for me. My cousin's wife wasn't even overdue, yet she started trying out every old wives tale in the book to induce her labor on her own; then my cousin was acting very much like Severus with the nerves. For three weeks he wouldn't even have a beer at night in fear that she would go into labor and he wouldn't be able to drive. I giggle now, but I dread the day when I am in that position XD

Can't wait for the next chapter. This is the only story I have actually been checking back almost religiously for, even if I'm not the best reviewer in the world. Your stories always keep me entertained.

-Momo