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for The Potions Master's Baby

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter xxxx happy the harry was supporting severus on this xxxx please add another chapter soon 10/10
person chyara
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hear ya SG. I just had my first baby 2 months ago, I was on bedrest from 31 weeks to 39 with Placental [tear]abruption. [3 bleeding events]
I do so love your stories, i come back and re-read them over and over again.
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!! I laughed out loud during this update. I cringed for her and him. I loved Harry's moments with Severus. And, I smiled at his nervous angst. This was utterly perfect. And, him smiling at the end...ahhhhhhhhhhh

Loved it!! Thank you. HG4eva
person yne-chan
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!
I have tears in my eyes!
This is so beautifull...
kisses!
=)
person kittycat30
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this chapter! I was totally enthralled with the idea of a "normal" birth. My little ladies tried to appear the day after my "early" baby shower at 26 weeks. I managed to keep them in until 31 weeks, but it was a struggle - lots of nasty drugs. I didn't get to hear them cry - I couldn't even see them until hours after they were born. Even then, I couldn't hold them. Even though you didn't experience it, in my mind - you captured the miracle of birth & I am headed back to read this chapter again! *sniffles* You're an amazing writer!
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a pip! I especially loved that line "You do it...You have the baby." I wonder just how many women over the thousands of years of existance have said that one? LMAO! Excellent work.
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! That was a sweet chapter. Great humor. You write comedy very well.
person Linzie
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really great! I just can't get enough of the story, and you are so good about up-dating! Can't wait for the next chapter.
person smmz79
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow great job... as i said before i love harry and ginny in this... they are soo light hearted and you can tell by reading them in your story that they are very loving, not depressed or grumpy like others write!!! yeah severus smiled!!!!
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AH!!! So cute! I looooove it!!!!!!!!