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for The Potions Master's Baby

by soldiersgirl0709

schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm all teary from ch. 19! Snape would almost have to be posessive of his child, especially if it were a girl. James Potter is definetly going to get hexed if he even breathes her name in his sleep! LOL.
person ginnyginny
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. if your new story has a happy ending, i'm sure i can handle the angst!
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh cuteness!
that wasn't the last chapter, was it?
person Utopia
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
New Daddy's do get a tad posessive - especially of a little girl! I have photos of when I was a few weeks old (and still in the premature baby unit); and my Dad is dressed in a lemon yellow hospital gown, a blue strange paper hair net thingy on his head, and covers over his shoes. (He looked a complete and total TWIT) He's holding me (while navigating drip lines, pulse monitors, and goodness knows what else I was connected to by wires and tubes... and he's got the softest facial expression I've ever seen. Well, correction, I saw it again when I picked my wedding dress - he went all soft then too.

My dad changed nappies around tubes and wires, he bottle fed me, bathed me... he did everything he possibly could before the matron threw him and mum out of the ward because visiting time was over!

Snape fell in love twice that day - good for him!

person neelix
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh how lovely! I can almost imagine how gorgeous little Eve looks!

Great update...loving this story still!
person makaem
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Severus needs to put her down or he'll have to carry her to kindergarten. My husband held our girls that way, I think he was afraid they weren't real. This is a wonderful story.
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I don't know what to say, really. First of all, I never left a review for any of your stories which I deeply regret. You are an amazing writer, each story better than the last one... Because of you I started reading Lumione fics - and I really wasn't very fond of them. I read every single story of yours and I'm very impressed. Every sentence is perfect, every ending is great, I really don't know what more to say. I just read the new chapter of ‘The Potions Master's Baby’ and I loved it... I'm not into fluff and stuff (ha! It rhymes…), but it was beautiful... Also, I don't like when the characters are even a little OC, but with your stories I don't mind at all. I think you described Severus fantastically in this story and I don't think anyone could do a better job. I can't wait to read more of this fic and many others... I hope you'll write about Eve's life and her love (for example: Scorpius... *sighs*), because I would love to see Severus as a jealous father, who's desperately trying to protect his daughter, lol... but if you don't want to, it's fine... Thanks for publishing your stories and sharing them with us... *hugs*
person MomoDesu
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a protective daddy. Snape in love, hehe.
person Citten
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AH! that was so cute and wonderful! I loved it!!!! well i hope that the next chapter is nice and long because i have a feeling that it will be the ending and i really hate that. :) well i will be watching for the next story when you do post it. :)
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. It was really nice that Argus made such a lovely gift for baby Eve. I thought it was sweet how Hermione knew what Severus was trying to tell her and admitted that she loved him as well. I look forward to reading more.