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for The Potions Master's Baby

by soldiersgirl0709

person MomoDesu
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Snape being twisted around the tiny finger of an infant. Priceless; especially her laughter. I love baby laughter, and how insane it can sound, like they are a little evil being in a diaper. It's always too cute though.
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ye Gods, Sev's got a 'Mini-Me'!!! ROFL!! Just the idea of him even trying to be intimidating while baby-sitting is just plain funny. Excellent chapter; I wish my mother had had an elf to translate baby gibberish for her. She had eight kids, six in six years and REALLY could have used the help!
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
person Lils
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww......my heart totally just melted with that last chapter.... :D :D :D
person triz
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved the way snape was possesive :)
person Sheena
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, what a sweet chapter.. the image of an overprotective snape really adds sumthin to the chapter.
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another marvellous chapter! Severus love for his daugther was priceless, and the crib Argus had made for the little one was such a fantastic little detail that makes your stories extra special!
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww that was just adorable! i love how Sev is so protective
person smmz79
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow..... oh i just LOVE severus as a daddy... what a great chap.... i especially love the part where they were lying in bed facing each other, it just seemed so tender!!!!